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by Maldoror

person Jena
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Um, just giving a little nudge...please don't forget this fic?!!!! I check on it at least every other day to see if you have updated....and to reread the story. This beginning is so intriguing, I just gotta have more!
person Freikugel
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! The characterization works, the events and plausible, and it's just... awesome.
I really want to keep reading it, please keep writing! Please?
person Kiara
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really intriguing! It captured my interest and continues to hold it, which is very rare, since most of the time I lose interest in the middle of the fiction and quit reading. Anyway, excellent writing and I will be eagerly waiting for the next chapters! Please, update soon!
person cve
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is fantastic. I really hope you will continue with this story, as I love the way you've portrayed the charas. Your writing style is beautiful.
person QPdoll
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH, sooooo good, I can already feel the addiction to this fic forming. Please update soon !
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...all I can say is. WOW. This is awesome. I mean, I'm literally tugging at my hair, wanting the next chapter, haha. I love how you wrote those brief 'action' scenes and I look forward to seeing more of those from you. I also like how you managed to slip in what happened with Orochimaru without making it seem like telling a story within a story. If that makes sense, lol. I also commend you on your characterization of Sasuke. Very focused, very intense...but in there somewhere is still vague remnants of the more volatile, emotional Sasuke and that's awesome. I'm SO looking forward to seeing this story develop as well as the interaction between Naruto and Sasuke and how in HECK you're going to get them together, lol. You kick ass. haha...GREAT job! I'm crossing my fingers for an update soon ^^
person Shinigami
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD! I´ve never seen a fic soo good! And you can rest assunder that I don´t leave reviews in every fic I read! I love it! ca´nt eait for the other chap! kissu!
person Berylia
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very good start, a lot of tensions between the chgaracters, everyone is in character... I'm really looking forward to this one. How will this team interact?
I love Sasuke's reflex, just like when he jumped in front of Haku's needles, damn reflexes!
person Kit
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nooo, not a slow fic:/ I allready left you a gushing rewiev at "Diplomatic Relations" so im not going to blab away again, I actually looked at this fic when I realised exactly who you where and what can I say. I love your storys, I love them! An because Sasu/Naru is my drug I am a real pushover when it comes to this story!!
person Jena
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow....just wow. So far, this is only the second story I have read where Sasuke had to endure any form of real punishment for his running off, and the only one that has Ibiki administering the interrogation/torture. Mega kudos goes to you! This is one story I will definitly keep an eye on. The way you write draws the reader in, I read the first two chapters in one sitting. I hope you can keep going with this. As for pairing? Naru/Sasu/Naru don't care which order, or no order at all. I have always wanted to read a story where they took turns being top, haven't seen that yet...lols! So, until next chapter!