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*drools*
this is gooood

heehee you should have kakashi get mad about naru's mask and make him wear it, im pretty sure its a kitsune mask, ne? lol -pets naru- me love his foxiness if only hed grow fox ears and a tail -sighs- ah well dreams can't always come true, but you should make him have a kitsune mask ^_^ well great story!! email me when you update, ja ne -waves-

Even better then the first chapter, and take your time i would rather have a good chapter then a rushed one.

Nice chapter Neji, Naruto and Sasuke on a team with that copy ninja Kakashi hehehe oh the sparks are going to fly

Very, very nice 2nd installment! Excellent read. Nicely written. I am totally enjoying how you've worked your story. The plot twists are enjoyable, completely unpredictable yet plausible. I love the slow build of tension. The pace of your story is nice and easy to follow. The sparring aspect was a bit hard to follow, but nicely descriptive nonetheless. Liking the parole terms aspect, adds slight menace to the overall feel. You have done a lovely job! Keep up the good work.

Can't wait for the next chapter! If you need any help, with beta'ing or otherwise, just send me a note. ^______^

~Kir

No worries on not planning it out. You're a great author either way. I can't wait for the next chapter and more info on Orochimaru's death. I'm so glad that bastard's dead in your fic. Whoopie!

I've been absent from this fandom for quite a while, but I think I'm going to get back into it. If I keep reading fics like this then I'll definitely restart. This was excellent. I love the way you've decided to portray Sasuke and how the story is developing. Please update soon. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Oh, wow. I really wish I was awake enough to give you the review you deserve for that, but... I'm not. Maybe next time, eh? As it is, I'll just tell you that while Sasuke coming back to Konoha has been done plenty of times, you've managed to make your story completely unique. I really like the way you've added in Ibiki's interrogation of Sasuke, because it seems real. Konoha or not, I can't imagine a village of ninja accepting a traitor back into their midst as easily as they do in most fics. Great work, and I'm already dying for more.

That was a great first chapter. I like the sytle in which you write. I can't wait to see what you will do with this.

This is very, very well-written. I greatly enjoy Sasuke's maturity in this fic, although it's obvious that he's still stuck in the past and hasn't matured quite fully yet. I'm intrigued to see what you decide to do with this story, and how things will evolve between Sasuke, Naruto, and the others (but mainly Sasuke and Naruto). I'm also fascinated to see what the deal with Naruto is (though I suspect his mask was a fox mask, which was why he was hedging around the topic so much) and why they want Kakashi to watch over him.

I'm intrigued. =) I hope to see more from you soon.

**Wolf**