rate_review Reviews

This was so hot, I love it!!! I just absolutely love it when Naruto is in charge of things! *giggles* please write more! :3

Being the pervert I am, you had me completely drooling next to my keyboard with the way you described the whole story. My god... *fans herself* Now, if you don't mind, I'm going to find some tissue to stop this annoying nosebleed ;)
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wow I defently want some more of this wonderuful snippet. I could see a whole story of this beside a fuck fest. please write more of this wonderful story.

*ish having a massive nosebleeding now* Ugh, ohmeguwd, soh kienky (OMG, so kinky)! Ness wan (Nice one).

May

VERY nice! Very raunchy! I love Sasuke as a bottom, and Naruto as top. It's the best combination.
This was very short, very sweet....I'm saying "very" a lot, aren't I?
I liked it. It's well-written and enjoyable to read. I hope to read more from you.
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That was really beautiful.A prayer to Sasuke's ass.I liked it so much,the dialoge,the actionand the descriptions most specially.A keeper,no doubt.I really wish I could explain my reaction to this better.This is my idea of romantic I guess.

Wow. I don't think I can even begin to give a coherent thought about the infernally hot sheer sensuality that is this fic. It was amazing. The wonderful amount of emotion, which built the sensual ambience of the story and the mind-blowing characterizations, which were well true to the originals but fit this extremely erotic fic perfectly. The sex itself was well written and extremely hot, and fit the story perfectly. Also the slight D/s kink in the mix was delicious. There was a lot of love in there, one of the reasons why this fic is as great as it is...

That was fun!!! I liked that.

That was a yummy one-shot. I hope you write another.