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person elict
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I. L.O.V.E. Y.O.U.R. S.T.O.R.I.E.S...! have read four of them
now and I absolutely ADORE them!

the way you describe sasuke's feelings and thoughts... why
he acts like he does... you are amazing!

thank you so much for sharing! sasuke/naruto rox 4-ever!

hugs /elict
person Nisha
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YO!!!! I recognised the dojinshi where you got most of your sex scene from, Chased Angel right? I love that one and it's my fave dojinshi out of all the ones i own. It's good to know that there are more Rabid Yaoi Fangirls/Fanboys out there that like the same things as me!!! Thanx for listning to my rantings, ja ne!!!
person Pinky
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it, I really did. Even though I'm a fan of Kakashi/naruto stories I loved your story.
person Sphere
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice fic! Love the yaoi scence but i think i read that somewhere...Did some of the yoai scence comes from naruto doujinshis like Chased Angle and Kitsune De Gohan?
person tsusami
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was cute. I really liked it :)
person akiravadel
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome! So cute and I love the ending. I noticed you used some of Zettai hentais moments when they were doing it. It's sad how I noticed these things. ^-^ I like how you added them in there. I do stuff like that too without even relizing it. Keep up the good work!(Plus I love what Tsunade said at the end!)

~Akira~
person Kero-chan
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG lol!! Nutty Sasuke, that was great! And the lemon scene I read in a doujinshi! Did you get it from Chased Angel, cuz I swear I've read it in there... x.x Great story! ^^
person Kativachan
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, you got parts of this from a doujinshi right? I've read it before, and I have it saved on my comp. I just can't think of the name right now. Maybe you should put a disclaimer up for that, just in case.

anyway, great story. Lol, Naruto is never seme! Noooo! Always uke.