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by Kakasmai

person Vague
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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person despairs
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story...not crazy about the Sasuke being with Sakura part of it but nevertheless i still think its a really great story.
Thanks for writing it =)
person Chria
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would worship you if you did do that oneshot when Naruto almost ranaway. Angst sex is the hottest!! I loved Deny very much. Everyone was so true to themselves that I was so impressed. Your writing is very good and I laughed a lot of times at those cute jokes. hehe One question, do the kids have Naruto's last name? I wasn't sure because Ino and Naruto didn't get married or anything. Thanks!
person **Hinata**
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was flippin awesome, although at first I was a bit wary of the Sasuke/Sakura thing... Okay, REALLY wary, but it was good. And I love how you ended it! I hope you'll make more fics soon because you have a great writing style, but theres one thing I notice you kept doing (ahh sorry, such a grammatic tic!) you kept putting then instead of than. Other than that your writing style's great and gramma too!

Please write more soon!
Hinata-chan
person Anon
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think that's a really cute idea ^_^
person Vixenia
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
-starry eyes- aww that is sooooooo sweet. i loved this story. it was awesome.
person mikkie
schedule June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more more more more make more story's more more more more mroe more..

loved it lots <3
person Neko-Chan
schedule June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NaruSasu and SakuIno in one house...meh it works ^_^ cute fic...lil OOC but then again Sasuke with feelings usually is odd ^_^ Good job! I like it!
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kakasmai, you've really outdone yourself with this fic. not only did you make everybody happy but you gave them babies, too. through in vitro! i've never seen anyone even attemp to use that in this fandom. it's like either naruto gets pregnant or he just doesn't get any kids. sasuke seems so laid back now that he's gotten what he wanted and more. needless to say, this is going into my green-yaoi-book-of-greatness. looking foward to your next ficlet.

~Devious
person Rei
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*giggles madly*
I love it! I love it!!!
you should write more like that it was cute and hot and gah!!!