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for Deny

by Kakasmai

person annesue
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg.. i love this fic!! it has a happy ending tooo!! ;DD

u rock!
person fujinakaheero
schedule May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, this is quite a good story so far. A few errors in your chapters but nothing that can't be fixed or beta'd.
Anyways, just wanted to tell you I read it and thought it's going along pretty well so far.
Good stuff.
Keep up the good work.
Ja ne!
Fujinakaheero
person Anon
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved it

please UPDATE soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person cibiboy
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Ch soo sas+naru and sak+Ino lol lol plez update soon
person Danya
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey
Great Chapter:D Sakura was awesome in it:D
Update soon!
person Kori Nibiki
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought you did a fun take on Sakura's character. .... So, Ino is Sakura's lover? and Naruto will be Sasuke's... Is that what you're planning? ^_^ Keep up the great writing and looking forward to the next update. Ja!
person Lanier
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I totally love this story. I like how you handled all the characters involved. I cant wait for another chapter.
person The Dragon\'s Lover
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
' One being Naruto's cheek had been sliced through so he could slip his tongue out between the folds of skin....'
Cool.....

Lime-flavored Kool-aid is all well and good, but I want my lemonaide!!
person The Dragon\'s Lover
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
'Maybe there was some hope for him after all.

It was then she noticed him start to write another note. One that declared that Naruto’s belongings were to be removed from his apartment - which had lived in since his youth - and be moved into the Uchiha mansion.

Okay . . . maybe not, but discreet and delicate was not in either of Naruto’s or Sasuke’s vocabularies.'
*pats Sakura on the head* Poor Sakura. She has to try and get those two too
person macy
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like this Sakura. i'm honestly tired of the way some portray Sakura since it seems like she has definitely matured in the manga. her character here worked really well. sasuke ordering naruto's stuff to be moved was amusing and totally sasuke, hahaha! great chapter, and as usual --- hoping for more soon. thanks ^^