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"but when it came to emotions and issues of the heart, the two were retarded." hahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa that was funny... and i hoe the next chapter contains at least a minimum of sasunaru action; i wanna at least read a description of one of their fine asses. please?

i love this, please hurry and udpate again a.s.a.p. and keep up the good work.

Good one, that was a really nice caracterization of Sakura I have ever read. I mean, I personally really don´t like Sakura in the anime or manga, but You got all thumbs up with this one, keep up the good work, ne? Just don´t rush it to the end, take you´re time with this one. There is so much "damage" that you can do in this situation. Oh and one thing, Naruto is no angel or saint, he is not above moping about losing his one true dream so easily, nor is he that stupid to play it childishly. Other that I hope this was something of a healthy critique, never done this much tho, so bear with me. Ja mata.

Oi...that means Sakura and Ino are hooking up together? Nicee..xD lolz. I actually like Sakuras personality here. It seems more..tougher and not too.." Fuck-sasuke" or like " OH-MY-GOSH SASUKE!" eughh....I hate when she does that..you get it? lolz. I like your plot and how you didn't make the relationships to rushed. Also..that means Naruto isn't a virgin?! *gasp* I mean he went out with Gaara...and well Hinata isn't much of a problem..but Gaara! lolz. I like that pairing actually. It's cute. Also Kakashix Naruto eekkk. lolz.

Great story and I like the plot. I also feel bad for Naruto because he has been deprived of his dream. His first life long dream. Wow this might be how the original Naruto may turn out! It sounds like it... How the people deny him of being a Hokage and how naruto is sad and stuff...everything for maybe except for the sex scene between Sasuke and naruto xD lolz. Oh well great job. ^^

KYAAAAA!!!I adore your fic! It's so realistic and the way you write is so damn good. Keep up the good work. I hope Sasuke and Naruto get through this and have a really deserving happy ending ^ ^

Your Sasuka is interesting. I do not doubt that she would grow up to be a beautiful woman. But her obssession with Sasuke is frightening. So much that it's pretty doubtful to me that she truly can get over it. Hey but then again, anything can happen ne? *grins* Really enjoy reading this story. I think that Sasuke's plan of moving Naruto's belonging to his mansion is going to seriously backfire on him. Hmm.........more? *grins*

YAY! i love your sakura, you did a good job. she's not annoying and she's cool and confident in her... erm... lesbianism. i always love this match up. sasunaru & sakuino all the way! please update soon! i want to know how this all gets resolved (ino having naruto's baby? wait, WHAT?! i didnt say that [is that what's gonna happen?!])

hehe, i'll calm down now...

dude, you can't leave it off there! MORE! this is awesome. ^^

Interesting fic...this has got to be one of my fave yaoi pairings ever ^-^. Very descriptive ;).

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