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for Deny

by Kakasmai

person shinta pearl
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW!! Romance is just far too under-done nowadays. I'm very happy with this. It's not JUST lust! They LOVE each other!! What a concept!!

I love it. Keep going!! *jumps around in happy circles and hugs plushies* KAWAII!!
person Kero-chan
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't care if you have them in the works! I want em NOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!! ;-; This is really good!!! I really love how you mellowed out the characters and everything, and I know how Naruto feels cuz I kinda do the same thing myself. :3 Great job here!
person blisblop
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree,keep it up!I am glad Sakura won't be a problem.
person whee!
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whee! I love it! :) Whee! Continue! :) More more SasuNaru more more! :) Whee! [I'm on crack XD]

Wanna hear/read from u soon! :)

Whee!
person kurokijo
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved your story. please update soon. can't wait.
person KitsuneFun
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! an update, any Romance between Sasuka and Naruto is a Good Romance unless its written badly but, in your case its written very well so I look forward to next chapter update *smiles* keep up the Great Work!
person ky0kichi
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I really like this so far! Damn straight Naruto! Don't deny yourself anything anymore! If you can't be hokage then you can just HAVE the one that's GOING to be! Huahaua!!!!!

Eeee. and who is rustling the bushes, ne?! SAKURA?! I hope so! -hates Sakura- :(((

Lol I smell an angsty situation coming on!! I love angst!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE sOON!
person Hezzer
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hottness ensues! ^_^ Loved the chapter. Much more incredible than the first, I think. Might just be the smut, though. =)
person EscagirlUK
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooh! But, err, Sasuke... Naruto... You aughta go get a room, Ero-Sennin might be watching and writing down notes for the yaoi version of Icha Icha Paradise... Anyways, great fic! Poor Naruto... Write more, please, and update soon!
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg! this is damned good. lovely cliffie at the end. i can imagine how pissed sasuke would be about being interupted from his time with naruto. i like your writing style and the way that you characterized naruto ans sasuke. and that little makeout session was very nice treat. and there is nothing wrong with a sappy fic. angst may make the world go round but sap is what keeps it all together. that and sex. ^__^ i will definitely be looking out for your next update so until then, ja.