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for Deny

by Kakasmai

person elley
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter, but I'm nervous to find out what happens next because feel angst is about to make her appearance soon. Anyway, I think this is a really great story. I'll definitely read the next time you update.
person Tiina
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This seems good, I'll definetely read more of this ;P There always needs to be a little angst in the story and Naruto's defeat gives it..
person Gingitsune
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I still think that it sucks to be Naruto. Sigh.......I'm glad that Sasuke realises his feelings for Naruto. So he discovered his feeling after Naruto dated Gaaru ne? Ok then it's not so bad. I just watched Alexander. How could he marry another and forsake his love after the years that they had been together for the sake of heirs? Argh!
person Justajester
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't believe you done that to us! A cliffie. How could you?

I go and be sad and agnsty now. :,( Boohoo.

Update soon please. I will love you forever and ever and ever. :D
person Baka_Tsu
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it. XD Perfect beginning, perfect plot, perfect character descriptions =d This is definately gunna evolve beautifully and I plan on seeing it >D
person himeyume
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was getting good! damn cliffhanger! pls update much sooner than that! pls ^_^
person Anon
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it very much
hope to see what follows soon!
person Kali S.
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have one thing to say. *ahem* STUPID FUCKIN' COUNCIL!!!! FUCK SASUKE!!!

Shit. That was two things. Oh well. ^_^
person Seto\'si Darkness
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Even though Sakura has improved in the latest manga chapters, I still don't like her. ^__^ That's why, Naruto don't keep on denying yourself the happiness!! :) Me want SasuNaru! XD So.. it's only for four chapters? That's kinda short.. compared to most fics with this concept/idea of one of them already married and have a child. :D But hey, who am I to complain? Your story really ROCKS! :)

::wa
person Seto\'s Darkness
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Even though Sakura has improved in the latest manga chapters, I still don't like her. ^__^ That's why, Naruto don't keep on denying yourself the happiness!! :) Me want SasuNaru! XD So.. it's only for four chapters? That's kinda short.. compared to most fics with this concept/idea of one of them already married and have a child. :D But hey, who am I to complain? Your story really ROCKS! :)

::waiting for more!::

>>Seto's Darkness<<