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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ho ho ho this chapter was fun to read and what in the bushes now?
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good update :D You seriously caught the characters well ^^ Excellent update, keep'em coming!
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
rawrrrrrr...another cliffy? how could you?? so mean XD heeeheee..just goes to show how much i enjoyed the 2nd chapter. i like the angst and the romance. yum. there were some grammatical errors but another than that, it was awesome. i'm extremely curious of who the person in the bushes might be, and also as to how their relationship would progress. oh, and a rumor about sakura? interesting. i am definitely looking forward to more. thanks!
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EEEK XD
I lOVE it... PLEASE continue soon ^^
whee Naruto and Gaara... *chuckles* niiiiceee XD
update update update ^^
*thumps up*
Kurenai
I lOVE it... PLEASE continue soon ^^
whee Naruto and Gaara... *chuckles* niiiiceee XD
update update update ^^
*thumps up*
Kurenai
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love Naruto. Hates it when he gets blamed for something that should never be his fault. Argh! Sigh.....if Sasuke loves Naruto, why is he sleeping with Sakura? Argh! Poor Naruto. Hope that you will let Naruto have his happiness. Maybe with Neji? *sticks tongue at Sasuke*
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really really good start. I really want to see how the characters progress and how the story plays out. I'll be waiting for the next update. :)
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this story!! It makes me happy that this is different...usually Sasuke is the tortured soul. I like angst. Ngst makes me feel better about my crappy life.
Update soon!! *huggles*
Update soon!! *huggles*
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, thats a great beginning. You have to write more.
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Never see a lot of these stories around! Keep up the good job!!!
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey nice story really loved it! Can't wait till the next chap! Anyway update soon!