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cool! please update soon!!!!

Ah, not enough Oro/Kabu for me. XD I did like it though. I'm not a fan of Kaka/Sasu at all, and not a big Uchihacest fan either, so I suppose it says a lot that I like this fic lol Then again, it did have mt OTP Oro/Kabu.

As far as a storyline goes, I really do feel you left off with Kabuto pretty bluntly. Meaning, he helped Sasuke to escape and all, and then that was all that was said of him. We got that little scene, but it didn't end with any words hinting as to what was to come for him. A plot hole! Sorry, I'm one of those authors who likes everything wrapped up if the writer says 'the end' as you did. I think the fic still has promise, though I'm still annoyed at the sudden switch from 'Oh, I killed my brother.' deadpan to 'ZOMG LURV U ANIKI!' ^^()

Haha, that was definately very good! *throws buckets of confetti* XP I can't wait for your next chapter
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Ooooh, I can't wait for more! This is too good! That was very slick what you had Itachi do, fake his death, and then come back and screw his brother! I get the feeling things are gonna get even better! EM

yay for uchihacest! write more write more, i want to know what itachi meant by everything comes at a price...

Yay! You updated! I hope your winter break went well...and hopefully by next week you'll up load another chapter(that was good oro/kabu smut, btw.

update please!!

GAH!! XD Loved it! Omg, it's really good so far! update soon, okay?

w00000000000t! Itachi's come back to claim Sasuke! MUHAHAHAHA! w0000000000t! Rape him! Well, you can't rape the willing. ~smirk~ Oh, is poor Itachi getting jealous of Kakashi? Oh, this fic is awesome! And ya! You are only doing a half of Kaka x Sasu. TT_TT Naw, one-third! XD But this story kicks ass! I can't wait for the next one! This is keepin' me on the edge, terrific job! ~thumbs-up~

Holy Cliffhanger!! Please put out the next chapter soon. Or I will die with anticipation X(