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for Territory Which None Trod

by YakushiAyane

person BballAnimeLover89
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO!!!!!!!! EVIL CLIFFY!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!
person ShojoShinigami
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A great fic your written. I finally found a great KakashixSasuke fic. They are rarely together and I love the way you're writting this story. A very interesting plot. I hope to see more soon, it's worth the delay of your update. Keep going your good job!
person kyoslover
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You absolutely must continue! I love your fic. Kakashi/Sasuke is so sexy! I love em! Moreeeeeeeee!
person TaiyChan
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! This story is really really good! YOu have to update soon, ok???????

Great job!
person SplitPersona
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kathrine: Oh this was a sweet chapter.
JC: Kakashi and Sasuke! Nummy...
Kathrine: I can't wait for the next chapter. It was very realistic how Naruto and Sakura reacted to Sasuke. I think they are the only ones who would be so happy to have him back.
JC: Sorry for not reviewing sooner, we're sick. But I do hope we'll get another chapter soon to soothe are aches and sniffles. *hint*hint*
person SplitPersona
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kathrine: This is getting good... To make is sound cliche, I'm lovin' it.
JC: Okay, Sasuke and Kakashi, Sasuke being stalked on his first night back, Sasuke going crazy, Itachi not really dead it would seem...
Kathrine: You have us on the edge of our seat! Soo much detail... Wonderful.
JC: We even got two chapters this time we checked! YAY!
Kathrine: Cannot wait until you update. We're going crazy with anticipation and suspicions. V^_^
person blisblop
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have always seen Kabuto as a double agent,the Akatsuki part was surprising...Naruto is alive so I think....I am not gonna say,Run Sasuke Run.Uchihacest is always close to my heart....bad heart.
person JCooper
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
JC: More!!!!! You're driving us crazy!
Kathrine: Is Itachi REALLY dead this time. So many times we've seen the story where he ends up not really dead, but that could just be because he's such a persistent bastard.
JC: Definitely runs in the family. But now we're just dying to read what happens next. Will the village forgive. Probably not without a lot of begging/groveling, or hard work to regain the trust he lost.
Kathrine: At the same time, I wonder who will be the first to go after him. Akatsuki or Oro-chan?
JC: Update as soon as you can. Don't rush, though. We'll be paitient.
Kathrine: For a while. ^_^
person SplitPersona
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
JC: Yes! We like this story already.
Kathrine: Even though Itachi died, I still am falling in love with it.
JC: The plot that you described, the pairings you posted. Yes, we definitely want to see what else you can achieve with this story. Will you be updating often with short chapters or less often with longer chapters?
Kathrine: KakaSasu!!!!! There is soo not enough of that pairing to go around. We need more supporters!
JC: Usually not into the near-hebophilia with adolescent Sasuke and adult Kakashi, but something about their relationship is much deeper than they let be known.
Kathrine: I know that Sasuke almost killed Naruto to get the Mangekyou Sharingan, but I could almost see the same thing happening if he killed Kakashi. Let's not thest the theory, though, okay? Can't wait for the next post, will be keeping a look out. ~_^