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WTF!!!! you can't just end it there write more for god fucking sake. (and if you don't ........well bad stuff will happen)

HOMYGOD. OH, MY GOD...I usually don't review on AFF...but this story is bondage AND Gaara-uke! That's like...humanly impossible to find!! I'm trying to keep myself occupied while my RP buddies aren't on, and I found this, and OH, MY GOD. YOU NEED TO UPDATE ASAP. I DEMAND IT. No, really. I do. Have you figured out how to read your reviews yet? I don't know any special way to do it other than going to your profile and clicking the number of reviews...then you can read it...

...wait, that's about as smart as putting the directions on how to get a box open inside a box. And I have seen that happen.

ANYAYS. I LOVE IT. YOU WILL CONTINUE. DO AS TEH GREAT JK SAYS AND YOU WILL BE REWARDED WITH ANOTHER REVIEW!!!

*drools* hawt, hawt fic! and I bet there would be a lemony yaoi lemon in the next chapter! why did you cut it? hmm..can't wait to see another chapter~

WAAAAAHHHHH, don't leave us hanging, update please, I'm hooked, curious, salivating, those 4 are my favorites.

i think this is a really great story, the plot line is great and the characterization is wonderful, but i suggest (not to be mean) that you should have a beta read over this before you post. Keep up the good work!

gaaaaaaaaaaah GAARA IS SO FREAKIN HOT@!!!! CFEJGJKWEV E
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*spazz* god your a great writer.. him and sasuke are so fucking hot../. then neji showing up.. oh god.. i love you!!!!

Hurray for teamwork! (I really liked the last sentance in this chapter.) And hurray for the uber hotness that is uke-Gaara. And akljd;sklfjaklsdjf Bondage! On Gaara! Now he can't possibly be seme! *has happy fangirl spaz-ness attack* Right, done with that now, I'm just glad someone is finally writing some nice Gaara smut ^^.

Er, about the lemon, I've never really written one either, so I'm afraid I probably won't be too much help. Just uhm... don't forget the lube or whatever, 'cuz yeah, dry anal sex = teh bad. And so does using spit or blood for lube. Yeah, I'm real helpful, aren't I? *shakes head*

And I shall e-mail you the way to check your reviews because I'm bad at explaining things but I do have visual aids!

I squee for you. This is such a drool-worthy fic! I love it!! ::Hands a golden star sticker:: You deserve one!! =^.^=

You describe the boys well,the dialog is good.You could have the boys put on a tease with each other to get Gaara going then since we don't want people fuckied to death then all of them have to take him a dif waythen they could let him choose one of them to fuck the others could make sure he doesn't kill his choice.Use detail and reactions,that makes it hot.Don't rush through the fucking,facial reations and sounds,moves are all ahot. umm,just go for it.

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