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by midori

person MultifacetedTune
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful -- I loved it! Hope you write another "chapter"........ ^__~ Keep up the good work!!!
person Polka dot
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a very long lemon, funny though, especially the spanking I just can't picture that. I had to read it in parts due to it's length, hopefully I'll be able to go back and read it in one go at some point.
person hinshihoushi
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You guys are great. That was so well written. I really liked that it wasn't like some authors' oneshots that consist of a one paragraph lemon of a few sentences. I liked how you led up to it and the interaction between the charaters was terrific. I'm not surprised that I loved this considering your other works both done together and individually. Thanks so much for sharing.