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December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
never thought anything including Gai could be sexy, but this kind of is. Also, its hilarious
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hn... I don't think I'll ever be able to look at Gai-sensei in quite the same way ever again... You've turned me into a Gai-fan! Ieee!!!
*Sighs*
But, seriously, this is quite the excellent story. However, since I am a yaoi-pervert, I am somewhat disappointed by the lack of lemony freshness. The somewhat awkward nature of the lime was a good substitution, though. And it was a completely logical and sensible interpretation of personalities. Very rare in a fic.
*Sighs*
But, seriously, this is quite the excellent story. However, since I am a yaoi-pervert, I am somewhat disappointed by the lack of lemony freshness. The somewhat awkward nature of the lime was a good substitution, though. And it was a completely logical and sensible interpretation of personalities. Very rare in a fic.
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whoa....I found this out of pure luck....but still I love it though ^_^ I had a really good laugh out of this and it was interesting..also love the flashback parts as well
really nicely done...and it makes me wonder about those two now *snickers*
really nicely done...and it makes me wonder about those two now *snickers*
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August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was brilliant. I'll love you forever for writing this. They were both so IN CHARACTER, which is excellent. Gai was so cute, and I loved the whole Anko story; I can easily imagine her being the kinky type. I haven't been reading Naruto fanfic long, but this is the first fic I've read where Kakashi is so...Kakashi. And I luuuv me some Kakashi.
I loved it.
I loved it.
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man I was all like no! You must be the one to have Gai's virginity Kakashi! Then I went that was pretty cool anyhow. Then I was like no gimme the lemon! Then I was like that would probably have been weird, like I was violenting GFai in some way... I never get so fangirl as I do when I read your stories, I love your writing Mal I just hate the way it makes me feel, and yet I don't.
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG <3 this was so cute ^_^ I would have never imagined a Kakashi and Gai pairing before reading this <3 it was really well done, but I wouldn't have minded if the sex scene were a little more descriptive ^_^
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!
NOOOO THE END!!!!
YAY!!!!!!!!
This was awesome!
Congrats on it getting 1k hits btw too....
Hehe it was really cute, I like it alot!
Lol on the last scene I kept thinking that Gai was gonna freak out about an anerversary or something(that was the vibe it gave me), so I was actually surprised when the challenge was issued..good job!
I really liked the whole feel of this..yay!
Until your next fiction! XD
~alisha
NOOOO THE END!!!!
YAY!!!!!!!!
This was awesome!
Congrats on it getting 1k hits btw too....
Hehe it was really cute, I like it alot!
Lol on the last scene I kept thinking that Gai was gonna freak out about an anerversary or something(that was the vibe it gave me), so I was actually surprised when the challenge was issued..good job!
I really liked the whole feel of this..yay!
Until your next fiction! XD
~alisha
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gyah. Sorry for not reviewing chapter 4, I totally forgot, sumanu!! Anywho, you certainly have outdone yourself, I'm sorry to see this story go... well, I kinda am and kinda am not... Gai and Kakashi.... I don't know how you managed to do it, but you did. I'm in awe. Of your writing skills, your ability to tell a damn good story, your characterizations... you truly have a formidable talent. I do hope you continue on, your "Anbu" story, but for your "Break in the Routine" you did an excellent job!
Keep up the awesome work! ^_____^
~Kir
Keep up the awesome work! ^_____^
~Kir
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Waaah!! I loved the epilogue!! So cute, so adorable!! Gai and Kakashi are an actual couple now, and it doesn't even disturb me! And yes, I will be one of the many to worhsip at the alter of Gai from now on, lol. Thanks for an amazing fanfic, and I hope to read more from ya!! ^_~
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great ending to your story. Genma and his "damn" every so often made me laugh, and the fact that Kakashi knew what Gai was making from the sound of the blender was a great touch. This was a great chapter, and I'm actually sad to see it end.
I'm still working my way through the rest of your fics, so I'll be sure to post opinions when I'm done reading at intervals.
~RA
"If I can't dance, it's not my revolution!" - Emma Goldman
I'm still working my way through the rest of your fics, so I'll be sure to post opinions when I'm done reading at intervals.
~RA
"If I can't dance, it's not my revolution!" - Emma Goldman