rate_review Reviews

very cool can't wait for the spicy stuff to come. More please?

Ooo I like this fic. >_>...Which is weird cause Gai weirds me out lol. But I like how more realistic you are with the issue of sex. For some reason basically all fics have the characters masters of it.

Ah, Mal. You make me so happy. I never thought I could see Gai/Kakashi, but you've done it. Also, you've cheered me up after a kinda crappy day (having more to do with 5 hours sleep and less to do with anything truly craptastical). I even got through updating hidden village by thinking I was going to go read this story.

It makes me laugh so hard my eyes water. :D

Now I must go to your LJ, where sometimes you have extra chapters of things lying around. Sneaky woman. :D

J

Review of chapters 1-2:

OMG!!
I never read a Kakashi/Gai fic before, didn't think I'd like it, BUT wow do I ever like this!!! Its amazing for me!!!
I throughtly enjoyed the first chapter which was almost all humor and CRACK XDXD
This latest chapter has been like: "Whoa...Wow", "YAY" I'm really liking this progression so far.....I can sooo picture this all too well its awesome!!! I can't wait to see what else happens, who Gai bedded( XDXD), how Kakashi is gonna castrate them and when Kakashi and Gai get together! O_O XD
This is some happy writing mate!
Can't wait for the next update!!
~alisha

You should write a altnerate fic where the three-way happened. XD

Again, my interest keeps increasing the more that I read.

VERY good--really enjoyed the process of analyzation in this--deeper than I've seen in most fanfictions.

I feel bad for Gai. :O

And I can't help but feel amused by the idea of Kakashi having fuck-buddies, and Genma one of them. It's just... heh. xD It's like me realizing one day that Gaara is uncircumsized. It was an absent thought, and it totally made sense, because of the sand, but it still made me go "WHOA!"

Your sparks of humor make me snort with laughter and have to get up. This keeps happening when I read your material. xD

You made only ONE mistake, though, when Kakashi says "But gay, are you actually Gai?"

ALSO, LOVE the Leeches of the Apocalypse--would, I realize, make an excellent band name.

Also love the descriptions you give. "But Gai had stopped pacing and was shaking his head in one of his exaggerated gestures, causing a ripple effect in his bowl cut that would have fascinated a mathematician." That was awesome.

Can't wait to read more! :D

Oh.

My.

God.

Single most funniest story I have read in a long while. Seriously. I have never laughed so hard!! I also have the sinking feeling I know where this'll lead to and the... umm... unconventional pairing it will represent, but I just can't help myself. It's like a train wreck. I can't tear my eyes away. I honestly can't, when the writing is this good. It should be illegal. Heh. Just kidding! I absolutely enjoyed this latest chapter. Too hilarious. Honestly.

The hilarity, the situations, the characteristics... you do it all so well. I especially loved that "But gay, are you actually Gai?" I can't keep the tears out of my eyes. Actually the only mistake I saw was the phrase where Gai was muttering... "just how unusual if was for Gai to mutter..." Otherwise, topnotch writing as usual.

*Sigh* I am sooo jealous! But I'm also so glad I get to read such quality work too, heh.

Anywho, I'm going to stop- I was going to say before you thought I was a gushing rambling idiot, but... *looks at the drabbling just written* I guess it's too late!!

Keep up the excellent work! Can't wait for more...

Poor Gai-Sensei.... heheeheheheh.


~Kir

I. . . I love you. I mean, not a Gai/K fan, here, but . . . ohhhhh, god. I have tears in my eyes from trying NOT to laugh so hard because my parents are sleeping. Also, I really don't want to explain this to them. Someone loves me, to send me this stuff. That's all I have to say.

Hee hee. Poor Kakashi.

*cackles*

J

*waves* Just me again. Ignore. Having issues.

J

Another excellent read. The challenge? Simply hilarious. Where do you get the ideas for your stories from? You have such an uncanny ability to tell a worthwhile story. Keep up the good work.

Can't wait for more...

~Kir