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by SilverblueDolphin

schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're horrible for leaving us like that. However, Kakashi whipping someone with a leather belt is isufferably hot. Poor Iruka, I only wished you'd let us in on how bad he got it. Oh, and I can't see Kakashi smoking.....but then again I can....wierd. Anyway, the Kakashi-san thing was throwing me off a bit, but otherwise, twas lovely.
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loving this so far! I like how Kakashi's all stern and authoratative...yum! Poor, poor Iruka! Can't wait for an update!
person ALD
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is that the whole story? I loved this chapter and hope there's more.
person holly dermovoi
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
meup!!!!!
finish It GODDAMMIT!!!its 2 good 2 be left hanging like that!!!!
person ZeldaFitz
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yea, you're back! I like the rewrite. It seems more polished. I hope you'll be back to posting again. I like all your fics and have missed reading them.
person MasterLenx
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update? What's taking u so long? Come on!
person Renei
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OHHHHHHHHH!! I MUST HAVE MORE!!!
person Violet
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SPANK HIM!!!
person mina-mina
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My oh my! This is the first KakaIru stories I've ever read like this! I really want to know what happens! please please update soon!!! Please please! I love Kaka-kun beating Iru-kun. (Call me crazy) It's addicting!

please update soon!

-much love, mina-mina
person bluesun
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooooo wicked u better hurry with this