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February 23, 2022 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yes. It made me cum so much. My pussy enjoys when Sasuke fucks Naruto's asshole.
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January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I totally agree with Kakashi, he is too good sometimes! XD
i loved your writing style and it was brilliant
My personal fav part was dat there was no mention of da pink bitch, Sakura ^^
lovez Sasunaru to infinty!!!
mwahahahaha
i loved your writing style and it was brilliant
My personal fav part was dat there was no mention of da pink bitch, Sakura ^^
lovez Sasunaru to infinty!!!
mwahahahaha
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November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwws that was adorable ^_^ and hott xD i loved naruto in it he was so ADORABLE lol. and sasuke was even hotter *fan girl sigh* and kakashi that perver xD keep up the good work
~SxRLoveless~
~SxRLoveless~
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August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was really good...sexy and sweet, just how i like it.
Yay for happy endings.
Yay for happy endings.
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March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've rad this waaaay more times than I sould!!Lol!!!!
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February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's not bad. Unfortunatly, you seem to be under the misconception that being uke or seme is a set state. It's not. The roles are often switched. For further information on how you can improve your yaoi writing and find out what's myth and what's fact about gay sex, I highly suggest that you check out this link. http://resource.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600090008
It's in the resourse section, underwriting tips about gay sex.
It's in the resourse section, underwriting tips about gay sex.
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December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oohhlalala
very very gooooood
but ah.....poor iruka
very very gooooood
but ah.....poor iruka
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! i loved it. can you write more?!?!?! pleeeeeeeeeeeeease!!!!!
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was a very good fic. It was very emotional for a short story which is good but there was too much spacing inbetween paragraphs but thats not a big deal. All in all great story.
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm not into the whole Sas/Naru thing, but this was interesting :3 Very nice