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by Trollmia

person Baka_Tsu
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Naruto's totaly adorable in this one xD It was well built, nice idea and descriptions ^^ Sasuke seems a bit OOC around the end, but He's one to hide his emotions... its good to see an outburst from the quiet one =d
person anomynous
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
um....wow....ehehe....nice. you should make a sequal, or continue the story or something. I wanna find out what would happen the next day. um....O SHIT ITS THE COPS! YOU'LL NEVER TAKE ME ALIVE! *Flips off police and runs away*
person nacht kind
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kakashi the dirty perv superhero of unexperienced gay boys.....oh, that mental image is gonna stay with me o.O;;

Loved it, Sasuke's a possessive pervert and Naruto is precious, all in all a good time.

I adore your work and hope you continue,
Nacht



P.S. I love barbaque. ::starts singing baby back ribs jingle::
person Green Roses
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bad? Absolutely not. I thought it was good.
A little lighthouse of joy in all these angsty fic you can find here.
You go girl!!
person maya
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, to answer your question, it was bad. Very bad. Bad with capital B. Congratulations, you managed to create one of the most OOC Sasukes I have ever seen.
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think I love you...You're amazing...and that was so cute and funny.
person Sukara
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was good...more SasuNaru please. ^_^ And the "Flames make a barbecue" made me laugh hard. xD
person Leasan
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oww...Sweet! realy sweet, and fluffy, and oh so very adorable! A perfect counterbalance to all that angst ever-present in the fandom! ^_^ I love it
person Organized_Chaos
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was.....hot.....O.O wow. I love that pairing too....
person chi no hana
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i read this again this morning. wow, 571 visits since i reviewd! i m glad i m not the only one who likes this!