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for Somewhere in the snow

by KrickItat

person Alpine02
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have really been enjoying this one.. It has a great story going and I really hope you update. The dynamic is so cool....
person kinoko *too damn lazy to sign in*
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, awesome story! I read the whole thing from start to finish in one sitting. For someone that types only using two fingers, you do a pretty damn good job! I like Sakura/Itachi parings, its sad that there are so little fanfictions out there with this paring. I like the intricate plot line, and I honestly don't know what is REALLY going on or what's going to happen next, but I will admit, I'm hooked. [Maybe a little addicted...] Send me an e-mail whenever you update, and although I would FREAKIN LOVE for you to give me a new chapter now, the truth is that I'll wait.... just cause this story is worth it. Keep it up!

♥,
Kinoko [kinoko_thelittlemushroom@yahoo.com]
person Akisoke84
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good. It's an interesting concept to do. I'm interested in seeing how this one pans out. I must commend you on the smut, it was pretty good and not a lot of people can write citrus very well. Keep up the good work.
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is a new twist i liked ur story very much and cannot wait for u to continue it althogh sakuras dizzy spells are slightly confusing when she was with itachi it seemed so real any ways absolutely amazing story i am cant wait for the next chapter just alert me when u put in the next installment kay? thnx ja ne! deedeesan
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying what you are doing with this fic. I like the new inner voice. What's the deal with affectionate Sasuke? Was that really Sasuke? I can't wait to see how it all plays out.
person teenage angel
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was really good.. slightly confusing.. but good! lol
and just to make sure, is this gonna be an itachi/sakura story?
or a sasuke/sakura story?
plz leave this an itachi one! that's the main reason i started reading this fic!
there r wayy too many sasu/saku stories out there!
plz don't change ur mind! =(
person Anon
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOO What an interesting twist!!!
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it's good, but does the behavior of her teammates mean that sai, nar and sasuke are in love with her?
and is she in some kind of genjutsu to dream such dreams about itachi?
i await eagerly for the next chapter!
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uh...Husband?
person jennjennr
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ha yeah so here's the first one, I don't remember the last chapter of this I reviewed for so I'll just go with the safe bet and choose the last one. ... ok geez, what... I love all the mystery which is real and which is fake, either could be and even both could be fake. I'm leaning toward the... Hospital being fake, at the begining Sakura was pregnant with Sasuke's child and had a miscarrage and all, something not mentioned at all in the hospital with all the interactions of Team 7, 'Oh gee Kakashi if there wasn't an avalanche then where did my preggers belly go?' Then again if the Itachi was the dream it is plausible that the being pregnant part was all part of the dream too, although why any female would dream that only to dream the daddy didn't like her and then to have it torn away by a heavy pile of snow landing on you is beyond me...

Although I don't think it's real, the hospital scenes are very interesting to read from you, almost none of the fics I have read from you really have any Team 7 interaction moments beyond the plot moving one's. The fact that these are non-plot helping and more just to show the team dynamics is so interesting to read from you. The way they all act toward one another, joking, rivalries, fighting, comfort I love the way you are writing it all. It's something I really haven't seen you do before and I am enjoying it immensly.

Ok well this is a good long review and I shall end it here saying I am sooooooo sorry once again for not being a good Krickets fan and reviewing as they came out *bows humbly asking-begging- for forgivness* I'll try not to let it happen again.

-Love Jenn.