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I am sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo confused....when did Sakura get back her memory???? One chapter she was sleeping (and no sex) with Itachi and the next chapter she was calling him a bastard and she remembered Sasuke and Kakashi. Yep, I'm confused. If you could clarify any of this, it'd be great! Oh, and update soon...I get very cranky when I don't get my way.

Mucho love,
the demon angel

Story's evolving slightly different from I thought... And I think it's missing a chapter in there somewhere... (in the snow? XD) From the last chapter I figure Sakura already did IT several times with Itachi, but I don't see any mention of it before that?!?!

Oh right, you got "An affair to forget" with 7 chapters instead. So are you updating that or this??

krickets! i love you! you finally updated and sakura has her memory back! yay! so... are the guys from her team ever going to find her or is going to be forced to stay with itachi? or is she going to eventually not want to go back? i want to know! gah! i know you said you didn't like it when people ask you to update, but i'm dieing here! please, please, please! i'll give you a dozen cookies if you update again soon! i promise!

Yo. Be happy cause your the first person I read on this sight. Well not realy the first "Master of Anime" was first but that doesn't realy count considering I only did it because I was reading a sencored version on FF.net. So YAY your #1 numero une as it were. I like the fic sofar even though it's seriously a fluff fest. oy you herd me fluff fest. but thats ok I still gonna read it, Because I Can. Itachas OOCness makes me laugh alot. he's funny when he's not being super cool and killing stuff.

Oh!i have an evil idea. I don't care if you useit or not but I gotta put it out there. ok here it goes."It would be realy cool if Itachi traind Sakura. I always wonderd what she would be like if she didn't suck so much at being a ninja. I mean ya there was that one time when she faught the puppet master with the oldlady but then everyone elss got stronger and she was back to being compleetly useless. and it would also be realy funny if in the end Sasuke was going to kill itach but sakura killed him insted." ya ya I know you already had a evil ending pland but I just had to write that one down.

Ho;y Crap that was a nice long review. I've done longer but that was decent. I feel proud of myself. Whoot go me. um....I lost my train of thought...o righ I was just rapping up.

just remember three simple words and you have the alumit comeback to any flame.

Because I Can

Gomen for the double post Ki-chan but is it posible to add thes story to an update list or somethinf that will let me know when ever you come out with a new chappy.

Ja ne
Because I Can

sweeeet an update! lol horny-cuddly-itachi? ooc, perhaps, but very entertaining... and i think him maybe doing it for the enjoyment of seeing her pissed off fits with his sadistic nature :p anyway, glad you updated! until next time..

~ lg

Even thought I reviewed on the other version of this story I thought I'd do it again, so here it is, and with a few corrections of my own damn grammer...

Ha you did update...I almost had a heart attack...and it's a long chapter! Be still my quakeing heart...(not quacking...) Wow yeah Itachi was a little Ooc, but you know what thats fine with me, as long as you update, I don't really care if you make him wear a pink tu-tu. Well ugh anyway, so now she remembers huh, cool, yet odd...you'd think she'd do more then just say you bastard alot, oh well I guess she is stuck there...and well yeah the sex was good so why leave right? I think you should add something of what Sasuke is doing during this time...at the beginning you had him say he'd search for her but for all we know he's sitting up the mountian twiddling his thumbs till spring comes...although that'd be funny if thats what he was doing...Thank you for the update, and I will try to be patient once again for another one, in the mean time I'll be thinking: Yo...update...you bitch.

....Im not sure what I can say about these new chapters....Hrm...Dare I be honest? *Will regret it.* Ok, I have decided to be honest! Ok, I maybe a few things, preverted for a girl is one. If I was up in a cabin on a mountian...whatever it is, however you spell that...I would probably not last more then a few I dont know...a day or so with his sexual appatite. (however you spell that, I dont care im not useing spell check damnit) I camend sakura for keeping herself together for that long. Oh you better be a guy damnit! There are too many girls that write good up here, how come once in a while there cant be a nice smart guy writer? And if you are a girl, you write good also, but blah you for being a girl.

To be honest, I wasn't expecting much out of this fanfic when Sasuke was so OC in the first chapter, but since then it's developed pretty well. This story is very creative and original, even if it seems to lose focus on occasion. I like the way you depicted Itachi: accurately stoic and focused on business, but OC enough for the plot to move forward. This fanfic definitely yielded some good things.

Although, one thing bothers me. Why did Itachi need to load up that heavy sleigh with all their supplies when his hideout in the mountains was already so well stocked to begin with? O_o

very cool chapi..........is it safe to asume that sasuke's determination to find sakura is love? or is it guilt?............i think they should find out itachi has sakura...........how are u gonna do the confrontation between sas and ita.......fight to the death is always cool.............anywho update soone please.....keep up the good work :)