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for Somewhere in the snow

by KrickItat

person dazedKitty
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This fic is so fine...hehe... please update soon -^o^-
person Ha! you don\'t need to know Xp
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, even though there isn't much I liked it ^^ I liked the part when itachi shot the doe, it was nicely writtin. I hope you will continue on with the story soon, as I really want to watch the plot develope ^^
person Penguino
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really interesting idea. I think it's cool. Keep up the work, I'm totally up for the idea. Good job!
person FoxDemonKurai
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yum. This looks like it is going to very much to my liking. Then again, almost all stories are. Hehe, keep up the good work. *Hands author a cookie.*
person FoxDemonKurai
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WIFE?! Now THIS is definitely getting interesting. What, Itachi wants to take his little brother's beautiful treasure for his own? Hehe. Please keep it up, you are doing a great job. *Hands author another cookie*
person FoxDemonKurai
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
After helping the chick go to the bathroom you know this guy has got to feel something (good something, not disgust something) for her. No guy that thinks of one as a tool or even just to humiliate them would be that gentle and caring about it. Anyway, very good, keep it up. *Hands author yet another cookie and looks at the oven where even more are baking* Update soon while they are still hot!
person Sasha
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's a really good story so far. I really enjoy the plot, because it is so original. Please continue! Don't give up!!
person blisblop
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Teasing her,he should have wiped her too.Weird and wonderful.
person tsukashi
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey sweetie,
Wow! that was quite the little twist, with him telling her she was his lil wifey, can't wait to see what happens next. My step-mom does massage therapy, it is really hard on the hands, she's only been doing it for about a year now. Okie dokie, I will be watching for updates.
Fly
person kitty
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it's good coz i like the story...it's bad coz it only got two chapts -__-*** i'm angry!! u got my cliff hangin here..and i dont like it!! update or i'll beat u ><