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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Smexy SANDCEST! *SQUEE* Please?
I like the way you've described their relationship. They way they feel about each other. Sappy, I know, but I feel drawn towards it. I like the way Temari is drawn towards him, his features. How both Kankuro and Temari love their little baby brother. :)
I like the way you've described their relationship. They way they feel about each other. Sappy, I know, but I feel drawn towards it. I like the way Temari is drawn towards him, his features. How both Kankuro and Temari love their little baby brother. :)
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice start i like it alot keep it up man
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O OMG! I'm so happy you wrote this! I was wondering when you would write ch.3 of The Way We Were, but this made up for it! ^__^ I REALLY like this, and think that you've captured Kankuro and Temari very well. The only thing I can criticize are a few grammer mistakes, but other than that, it's all good.
DAMMIT! You MUST write a ch.2! =O I haven't read any good sandcest besides this, and it would be a terrible disappointment if you didn't update this. *beats on your writer's block* DIE! Oh man, I can't wait for an update. ;_;
DAMMIT! You MUST write a ch.2! =O I haven't read any good sandcest besides this, and it would be a terrible disappointment if you didn't update this. *beats on your writer's block* DIE! Oh man, I can't wait for an update. ;_;