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May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I LOVE this! I especially love the last line from Kakashi, it made me laugh harder than I had in a long time!
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July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
really nice story
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
killing me, you have to write a lemon for the story, it just isn't complete with out one
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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LMAO, I love it, I love it, I love it.
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't remember the last time I read anything with a smile on my face from beggining to end. You're... I don't know what you are. You're a fanfiction robot-genius or something. I say robot because no human writes this well. Teamwork, this, the multiple Teamwork side-stories and sequels, its absolute genius. You will eventually write the lemon-limey goodness before Kakashi arives. This is a fact, for Naruto and Sasuke arguing about where to put what would be hilarious ^.^ plus, you're probably making a whole lot of perverts very sad when they find out theres no sexyness >.<
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"But I don't see you randomly making out, mister 'I wouldn't notice a pretty girl throwing herself at me if she got naked, walked up to me and grabbed my junk'."
"I actually have standards."
And Naruto perving on mental images of Sakura/Ino yuri luvvins. Oh the mental manga-frame image there is absolutely priceless. Especially since I was viewing this all in Asuka-vision (meaning a mental series of comic panels in your artistic style...it doth amuse). And the pouncing of the Sasuke. YEAH, Team 7 gropage!
And egad, poor Kakashi. But he handles it with his usual grace.
*clings to Asuka's leg* WHY ARE YOU SO AMAZING! T_T
"I actually have standards."
And Naruto perving on mental images of Sakura/Ino yuri luvvins. Oh the mental manga-frame image there is absolutely priceless. Especially since I was viewing this all in Asuka-vision (meaning a mental series of comic panels in your artistic style...it doth amuse). And the pouncing of the Sasuke. YEAH, Team 7 gropage!
And egad, poor Kakashi. But he handles it with his usual grace.
*clings to Asuka's leg* WHY ARE YOU SO AMAZING! T_T
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June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Funny, loved it! :D Hurray for ganging up on Sasuke!
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June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SQUEEEE! I am officially ignoring the series canon now, because this is obviously the REAL way things happen. Yes.
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June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ye GODS! that was one of the best fanfics that i've ever read! and the last line! wow. WOW!
i am impressed, if you can't tell... sorry to get all puppy-ish on you, but again i say WOW! that kicked much ass. and your other stories? i'm convinced that between you and atropa, you'll be the death of me eventually. and i'm only 21... which is saying quite a bit. but that's not enough. i want MORE, more i tell you, MORE! you are the comedic visionary, with just the right amount of sexiness and just a drop of perversion that makes my brain dance with imagery, just from reading your stories. your simple prose amazes me and the way that you are able to keep the characters completely true to their cannon selves... beautiful. just beautiful.
i most humbly look forward to reading another masterful work, be it with the same pairing, or a different one.
it takes a lot to get the Hentai Wolf to review a FanFic. this is the third one i have ever reviewed after about two and a half years of coming to aff.net. be proud, and keep writing!
~Hentai_Wolf
i am impressed, if you can't tell... sorry to get all puppy-ish on you, but again i say WOW! that kicked much ass. and your other stories? i'm convinced that between you and atropa, you'll be the death of me eventually. and i'm only 21... which is saying quite a bit. but that's not enough. i want MORE, more i tell you, MORE! you are the comedic visionary, with just the right amount of sexiness and just a drop of perversion that makes my brain dance with imagery, just from reading your stories. your simple prose amazes me and the way that you are able to keep the characters completely true to their cannon selves... beautiful. just beautiful.
i most humbly look forward to reading another masterful work, be it with the same pairing, or a different one.
it takes a lot to get the Hentai Wolf to review a FanFic. this is the third one i have ever reviewed after about two and a half years of coming to aff.net. be proud, and keep writing!
~Hentai_Wolf
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PffffftHAAAAAAAAAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! BLOODY BRILLIANT! Ohmigosh! personally, I was terrified of having to read a NaruSasuSaku LEMON, but I'm heartbreakingly smitten with the plot...(snickers) Kakashi...utter brilliance...THANK YOU for writing this fic! Keep up the good work! ^.^