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i love the story so far i can't wait to find out if naruto and gaara end up ok or not i got to emit naruto is stronger then i. i would have whent back to that pool to freez in the cold water in the night but enn so can't wait for the next chapter =).

I really do love this story and I'm glad I found it. Though I have to reread it to see what I missed ^^; But I was reading your AN at the beginning of the latest chapter and I have to ask, how do you do it? how do you continue to write your fic in your own way without bowing to reviewers out there who rather read something else? In other words, how do you stay true to your fics instead of following some strangers comments on how they want to read it? Sorry I'm--nevermind. I'm glad I found this with great help from someone who pointed me in the right direction.

Didn't see much point to this chapter. The whole point to this meeting at the restaurant was for the 3 of them to talk. It was filled with a flirting host a flirting waitress naruto flirting with the food_ and no talk. Why hasn't Sasuke yet told Naruto about never receiving his letters and the letters he received were written by someone other than Sasuke. 7 chapters into the story and Sasuke hadn't told Naruto that yet. And why would letters be the only way they communicate? Hello telephones, internet, text, etc...I was repulsed by Temari's fag hag behavior with Naruto.

High school aged--gang banger dropouts owning their own kareoke business__that's not far fetched at all.

11 chapters into the story. Sasuke is even in his 'get my dobe back plan'--one would think that telling him about the faked letters and the conspiracy of his manager to break them up would have come up by now. Is Sasuke the retard or do you think your readers are, to forget something like that.

So much angst-I love it. Naruto and Gaara's relationship is uber cute. However, I am somewhat surprised Sasuke hasn't told Naruto about the whole “Kisame relationship sabotage” plan.

~Thanks for the update!

wow! I love your story and now I actually can't decide wether I want Naruto to get back with Gaara or Sasuke. though I really like the GaaNaru pairing I still think Sasuke should get another chance because he didn't want to break up with Naruto in the first place.. gaah! can't make up my mind x3 but I hope you update soon so I can see which on Naruto will choose :D

OMG i love this story please update i beg you

Great story! I've been waiting forever for you to update! This is definitely one of the best stories I've found on Adultfanfiction; I've never liked AU much and they rarely work, but somehow you make them just right and really awesome! I'm currently hooked on Do Over and Orange Crush, please update soon! And thanks for coming up with these amazing stories.

oh my god... Sasuke is actually going try to help Naruto get Gaara back?? Unthinkable! This is something I thought only Hinata would do... it must be love!


Ok. That settles it. The only way this thing can end happily now is with an awesome threesome. Gaara deserves to be with Naruto and Sasuke deserves a reward for helping his love out counter to his own wants and desires. It is the only way. (heheh =^^= they'd be happy.. I'd be happy.. everybody'd be happy.. its a win-win situation!)