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December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I personally think this is the best chapter yet just because of the characters!! XD I loved how pervy Zabuza and Temari were to Naruto! But it made me wonder.....Is there a Haku in this fic somewhere? =p! It was cute how Gaara was protective of his love's tart! Haha...Tart. Dumbz! MAN! I love that word...dumbz. *cough* I can't wait for the next update! I need more Gaara action! =p!
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December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I usually don't mind Sasuke-bashing... but ouch.
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December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another great chapter! Keep up the great work! =)
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
is this gonna turn out 2 be a Gaara/Naru/Sasu? lol the thought of them sharing Naruto is cute!
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, I really do, but Sasuke pisses me off. Even if he wasn't the one who sent that break-up letter, he still doesn't deserve Naruto!!! Ah, Gaara needs Naru-chan!!!
Can't wait for the next update.
BTW, "straight" means direct or heterosexual, "strait" means a piece of land that connects two larger pieces of land.
Can't wait for the next update.
BTW, "straight" means direct or heterosexual, "strait" means a piece of land that connects two larger pieces of land.
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your story, well-written and the grammer and spelling have no major problems which has become rare. About half the stories on here I've looked at are practically undreadable but yours is very good. Though I find myself worrying. I want Gaara to get Naruto in the end, I mean I do feel sorry for Sasuke but it's over and he lost his chance. Plus there is the fact that in almost all SasuNaruGaa triangles Sasuke ALWAYS gets Naruto. I can't think of one story where Naruto has ended up with Gaara in the end except for one where Sasuke was a psycho stalker (so I guess that wasn't a true triangle so it doesn't count). If you did have him end up with Gaara it would be a definite first. But it's your story and your choice, I just hope that maybe this influences you a bit:D Anyways I hope you update soon
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I heart your ficcie! ^0^
Very nice use of persona's and not too ooc lol. Update soon plz and keep up the kick arse work!
Very nice use of persona's and not too ooc lol. Update soon plz and keep up the kick arse work!
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ya , I like you story very much , ^^
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you have been doing something really fresh with the Sasuke/Naruto/Gaara pairings. I am really enjoying this story, and I hope to read more soon. Well done.
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehe And here i thought a bento was some kind of burrito. Shows how much i know. I LOVE GAANARU!!!! IT RULES!!!!! MUHAHAHAHAA!!
Sorry, i have problems. But anyway, YOUR STORY KICKS ASS!!!
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Sorry, i have problems. But anyway, YOUR STORY KICKS ASS!!!
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