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for Do Over

by KitsuneFun

person dyingstar-elipsis
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^ I love this chapter! There's going to be some serious jealousy going on, isn't there? By the way, I nearly MELTED at the Gaara getting up early to make bentos ^^ It's so SWEET ::hearts:: Can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon ne!
person Sekkei
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it, Update soon please!
person Hypnotic
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! thank you for chap. 2 please come out with chap three soon k? Oh and I love the part with Gaara and his candy sticks...too cute. I torn between waiting Sasuke and Naruto together and then Gaara and Naruto...both are great pairings, but I have faith in you and will happily await the out come!

Ja~
person Helain
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, great story!


please update fast! i really want to know what happen next ! ^_^
person hypnotic
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww I like this! hehe the way you brought Sasuke in was nice too, it keeps you on your toes. I hope you update soon okie dokie!

yatta!
person dragondame57
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow.. that was really interesting. i love a jealous sasuke! ^^ teehee.. update soon! i want to see how this turns out..
person dyingstar-elipsis
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is so interesting! i'd love to see how it turns out. i'm not sure if i support gaanaru or sasunar (my fav is sasunaru but gaanaru is so CUTE!) but it's ur story so do whatever you like. it's really a terrific start and i can't wait for the next chapter! Great job!
person Hellagoddess
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey!! This is really good!! I'd love to see what happens!! Please update soon!!

Hellagoddess ^^
person Lack_Honesty
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay for GaaraNaruto, hope it'll remain the major couple, since I like Gaara very much and there aren't that much fics with him and Naruto...
person macy
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
waaa!! i like this! great start. it was a little short, but enough to hook me *LOL* I am definitely looking forward to more. Sasuke's "band look" was different yet strangely hot. ^^