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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy hell, that's got to be the best twist I've ever seen...Must have more...
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!!!
I'm so Happy right now, thanks for continung this!
Can't wait to read more!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm so Happy right now, thanks for continung this!
Can't wait to read more!!!!!!!!!!!
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woo! And I absolutely BURST out laughing right around the middle of this new chapter thanks to this line:
""You..." Sakura pointed, her voice quacking in anger."
Now I can't get the image of Sakura angrily quacking like a duck at Itachi out of my head. XD
""You..." Sakura pointed, her voice quacking in anger."
Now I can't get the image of Sakura angrily quacking like a duck at Itachi out of my head. XD
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, come on!!!!! So close, so close.... twice! There is no way in hell you can leave this one hanging!
^.^=
By the way, this is definatley one of the better stories out there. A developed writing style on this site is a rarity in itself. All of your scenarios are believeable- not overly far fetched, and I must say that the first two chapters still stand to be my favorite though. Great job and I am glad that I stumbled across this fic today.
Thank you.
^.^=
By the way, this is definatley one of the better stories out there. A developed writing style on this site is a rarity in itself. All of your scenarios are believeable- not overly far fetched, and I must say that the first two chapters still stand to be my favorite though. Great job and I am glad that I stumbled across this fic today.
Thank you.
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my!
That was really good, and I do really hope you continue. The coolest things about it were that you actually very accurately portrayed the 'feeling' of the anime, with everyone suddenly appearing from nowhere when Sasuke and Sakura kiss for example. In general, it has a very anime feel, and I think the progression to the relationship bit was honestly done.
One thing that I must admit was really kind of interesting was the Sasuke stuff... turning him into a sort of... stalker type made things really interesting, since Sakura was now most likely the one kunoichi who wasn't all up on his stuff *wink*
I would really like to see more on that. Even turn Sasuke into a villain... yum!
That was really good, and I do really hope you continue. The coolest things about it were that you actually very accurately portrayed the 'feeling' of the anime, with everyone suddenly appearing from nowhere when Sasuke and Sakura kiss for example. In general, it has a very anime feel, and I think the progression to the relationship bit was honestly done.
One thing that I must admit was really kind of interesting was the Sasuke stuff... turning him into a sort of... stalker type made things really interesting, since Sakura was now most likely the one kunoichi who wasn't all up on his stuff *wink*
I would really like to see more on that. Even turn Sasuke into a villain... yum!
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don't you dare end it off there! :(
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DON'T YOU DARE END THE STORY THEIR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It would just be to crule, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It would just be to crule, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOO PLZ! I want more of the story! I want more kaka/saku plz dont make us suffer like this! /cry
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooooooooooo write more pleasseeeeeeee. Dont let the story end *cry* Finally the kiss and this should be the end? whats
with the book? I want more Kaka/Saku action. Moreeeee pleaseeeeeee *bow* *beg* *puppyeyes*
I´ll do anything for you, put please dont let it end *cry*
*beg* *beg* *beg*
with the book? I want more Kaka/Saku action. Moreeeee pleaseeeeeee *bow* *beg* *puppyeyes*
I´ll do anything for you, put please dont let it end *cry*
*beg* *beg* *beg*
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was unbelievibly enthralling and so damn hilarious..
It's like every other paragraph I had to take a walk w ith how funny and intence the scene was getting.
Great fucking job, Bastard. I love you. -stuffed a kakashi plushie at Blue before running away, giggling manically to herself-
It's like every other paragraph I had to take a walk w ith how funny and intence the scene was getting.
Great fucking job, Bastard. I love you. -stuffed a kakashi plushie at Blue before running away, giggling manically to herself-