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by typhoonjax

person shadedfaith
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again, you've saved me [read: helped me procrastinate] from studying for my Biology test tomorrow XD;;.
Ah, I suck-tte bayo, and I do believe that mysterious blondie trying to knock up Sasuke is, too.

Dear lovely, I do adore how you write, describe, and feed me angst. It's so wonderful, and happy, and eatable. Definitely eatable. [Bio makes me loopy]. I feel so very, very bad for Naruto -- poor thing, probably going to be shit faced when he finds Sasuke as he is and was and going to be with Mysterious Blondie -- and daaaamn it; I just feel so bad for the both of them.

None the less, you are brilliant and I believe that you'll write whatever's going to happen just fine, un.
Please, do update soon, won't you?
person no name for now
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wha??? I'm confused.
person lalala
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke's gonna be mad when he sobers up. I smell a misunderstanding coming...
person Loveless
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Intense chapter. Snaps, here I was hoping Sasuke would "wait" until he and Naruto went at it, but I guess we can't always get what we want. =/

Haha, but anyways, amazing details and the imagery...I could just see it all in my mind's eye!

Can't wait until the next chapter!
person shar
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, very interesting style of writing. I enjoy your imagery and detail, and all of the voices and fantasies in everyone's minds. I like where this is going, and I like your characterizations a great deal. Can't wait for more.
person Lolly
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice so far! I enjoyed every word of it. I can't wait for an update!
person Dark Avenger
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, hun...
that's some hot stuff & I'm only on chapter 1. 0_0 Must... read... more

~Dark Avenger
person Dark Avenger
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn girl... this is just.... oh my holy hell. The whole Sasuke in that outfit in the club, the seductive looks. I think I melted into a little puddle of Dark Avenger goo.

~Dark Avenger
person Dark Avenger
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
shit woman, how much can you possibly torture me? sasuke, naked, NOW. .... yeah, it's now 4:41am here, so forgive the babbling. Ask me tomorrow what i really think, i may have a coherent answer for you... i hope.

~Dark Avenger
person Anon
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your writing style kicks ass. the humor kills me XD