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Wow, this is a good story! There seems to be such a lack of good SasuNaru stories lately... so, it's a treat to finally come across one that I really enjoy. Your writing is so beautiful and full of wonderful imagery... it makes it so much easier to visualize what is happening. Anyway, I'm not usually very good at reviewing, and I often don't for that reason, but I just wanted to let you know that I enjoyed reading this. I look forward to the next chapter... please continue soon!

great story. I love your writing style. thanks for writing.

Beautiful, beautiful as always! -Cheers- I loved it. I loved how you portrayed the dream. I could picture Sasuke threading the beach-pieced necklace around Naruto's neck, the embrace and how Naruto had clung desperately close to him before he woke up from the dream.

It's sad, that it is. To see Naruto in such pain, I mean. The blonde doesn't deserve that.

And Sasuke's view was just great. I could also imagine where he was, the hatred he felt for his older brother, ( Mind you I write Incest. -coughs- ) and the way he portrayed the table above him. xD That was just awesome. In all ways possible, I do believe.

I really do hope the two get together, and I hope Sasuke's looking up at Naruto and not some pervert. ;.;

Much love.

SasukeItachiSmex

LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE IT!!!!!!! Is so amazing!! Poor Naruto-kun he had a dream!! A really strange one, an painful at the end. And Sasuke is drunk!!! Well dunno really. Anyway, is great, very well done and wrote. Keep the good work!! NaruSasu powa!!!

Ohhhhhh, man. Another excellent chapter. This chapter was written even better than the previous ones (If that's possible. ;P). *shivers excitedly* Can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon, and good luck. ^o^ *thumbs up*

What an avid reviewer I am. Suppose my underlying intention is to hurry you along with this marvelous fiction.

Oh! I do, I do! Review = love, un!

Damn, I don't think I reviewed chapter two and smooshed you with love. Hm, I am very sorry. Anyway, I loved this chapter just like the rest, very pretty as usual, but this time it filled me with an odd sense of doom. Weird, but oddly satisfying. My suspicions lurk in the shadows waiting for you to update, poor dears XD.

Man, you have no idea what heavenly good you've made of my day because of your update today! See, around some minutes ago I've been studying like a sleazy crack addict for a stupid biology test [stab, stab, die.] and then I took a measely [cough] break and... I found this, wee! Aha, I apologize if I make little sense, but, erm... yeah, thank you, un.

Is looking forward to the next installment, yo. Have a gingerbread man!

love? and do update! ^-^

omgsh.. that's awesome! i love a uke-fied sasuke... *drool* he sounded so cute! ^^ update soon!

Beautiful writing. Lovely. I don't have words for how much I enjoyed reading each and every sentence through-out both of your chapters. I adore how Naruto is possibly going to be dominant over Sasuke. For I believe that Sasuke is a whore who loves attention from the blonde.

Isn't he, though?

A hot little whore begging for attention. I think I might actually write a fic about that. *Nods* Definately.

But back to your story. I loved the phrasing and wording, the way I could picture Sasuke's hands over his own body. His clothing fascinated me.

I adored the anxiety I could feel that Naruto was feeling. The empty loneliness that he was having then suddenly after thinking about his team mate--Sasuke, he wasn't alone anymore. I felt that way also.

I'm a major fan of Naruto, and I really do hope you update soon. One of the few stories I love.

Keep going.

Much Love.

SasukeItachiSmex ( Too lazy to sign in, obviously. )