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by typhoonjax

person Snowfall
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL I just loved the scene with Sasake at the club. Damn that was hot, and amusing as well. I hope Itachi doesn't show up. That would just suck. You've given us a wonderful time, feeling Naruto's free frolicking spirit, delving into the surface of Sasuke's lust, and the sheer picture of the environment. I love the way that you wove the history into the fic without taking us through a boring narration.

Great work!

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
person XHidaka
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO SASUKE DONT DO IT!!! He can't just go fuck some icky fanboy! NARUTO TO THE RESCUE!!!
person blisblop
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great descriptions of Sasuke in club,yee gods!Good voice here.
person Jem
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eeeee~ Sexy sasuke!! Wow, i really cant wait to see where this is going. Your so descriptive of everything, this is really well written! Can't wait for more!
person diamond_princess2006
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhhhh i'm so liking where this is going please continue !
person Aphrodite
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMGRHFDGHNDFBD! O_O That was flippin' awesome. So wonderfully written! Prance Little Naruto! PRANCE AS IF YOUR LIFE DEPENDED ON IT! *frolicks with Naruto* Happily awaiting your next update. ^o^ *cheers*
person Sas-uke
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mou... you tease.
person Sas-uke
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Like it muchly. Do post again soon.
person Hime-sama
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YUMMY!!!
person dawn
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool sorry i'm not to talktive right now so that's all i could come up with