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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not much time for a good review, got a class (x.x; and a test) in a bit, but that was very good. I'll look forward to an update, and can't resist pointing out that Sasuke now has a lovely yellow stain on his crotch. XD
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh i would love to see how you get these two together. Keep on writing.
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If reviews equal love; your fic equals sex, un.
Aa, I haven't read something so absolutely captivating and hilarious in so long! It's beautiful, fan-fucking-tastic, Z0mgwTfbbq worthy, and... just, wh0a. Erm, but aside from that, I really enjoyed it. Your imagery was something wonderful, enhanced by your array of vocabulary [some which I had to look up, oi], and how you gave them such well-rounded characterizations.
Jeez, you're so freaking cool.
So, anyway, I hope you update reaally[!] soon, 'cause I'll be stalking you from now on, un ^^.
PS: I love the way you wrote Sasuke[!!1!!!11one!z!] -- argh, I'm a sucker for uke!Sasu; dank ke for making my day XD!
Aa, I haven't read something so absolutely captivating and hilarious in so long! It's beautiful, fan-fucking-tastic, Z0mgwTfbbq worthy, and... just, wh0a. Erm, but aside from that, I really enjoyed it. Your imagery was something wonderful, enhanced by your array of vocabulary [some which I had to look up, oi], and how you gave them such well-rounded characterizations.
Jeez, you're so freaking cool.
So, anyway, I hope you update reaally[!] soon, 'cause I'll be stalking you from now on, un ^^.
PS: I love the way you wrote Sasuke[!!1!!!11one!z!] -- argh, I'm a sucker for uke!Sasu; dank ke for making my day XD!
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you know?? i think i might just like this story. wonderful start! (piles encouragement and praise on helpless unsuspecting author) here have a rose @--^---
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*snerk* Poor poor Sasuke. But yay! Much goodness. I can't wait to see another chapter. =^_^=
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love=Fic. *fangirl squee* I love your imagery, your details.. and the fact that Sasuke resorted to lemonade. You don't even what to know how much I want a seond chapter. And, even aside from thefic of wonderfulness, there's the fact you _used_ grammer! Spelling! AND it was a thing of beauty! I love the start, I love the way you portray the charactars.. please continue! Update very, very soon.