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for The Sharingan and The Blossom

by aiimeru

person krickets
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that...
was so totally hot
you made me break out in a sweat
and i just wanted sasuke to pound her into the wall

man you make them so sexy
and ill be eagerly anticipating your next update!

but the gaps between your chapters were pretty big
it was kinda getting annoying having to scroll so much
thats pretty much it as far as critique goes
person Kin-kin
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I just reread it so now it makes sense (the party thing :P ) very good update! I love the ending on this one, a real cliffhanger XP
I wonder if this would be classified as a chemistry (Like love at first sight thing) or something else (can't think at the moment ._. )
People should review more (I need a soap box .... XP) yesshhh please do update soon!
person krickets
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh i really wish you would update this cause i think its a very good story
also if you are looking for reviews it might be easier if you just changed this
so that it came out on the regular naruto page
these subcategories dont get looked at very often all though the SHOULD be.
in fact alot more people should use them then do....oh well
person Chiza
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wooohoooo! Always loved the Itachi and Sakura pairing! Something about Itachi *wink* I sincerely enjoyed your first chapter of this story very much ^^ Eagerly looking forward to you continuing the story =)
person krickets
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh! very pretty! i really hope you can update and add more chapters because i think you have a great begining
ita/saku is my FAV couple and i never see enough of them to last me!
person Kin-Kin
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Is blushing* heh heh heh, Now I have to go check if you have the sequel up *is hoping that its under a different story name*

I was confused whether is was AU or not, I mean, If Sakura's mother would have a dinner party. I like how you portray Sasuke and Itachi, especially Sakura, she seems very grown up. *is happy*
person Saer
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story, cant wait to read more. Please Update!