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June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Usually, I'm not interested in the more esoteric pairings, but I decided to read this one, since I like your writing in general. I have to say, I'm in love with this fic. I can see it's been a looong time since you added anything, but hey, I hope people are still enjoying my stories long after they're finished, so why not assume you would, too? Your characterizations are wonderful, the plot is both poignant and fascinating, and you know how to use spell-check. Awesome.
I'd love to see more, someday, if possible.
I'd love to see more, someday, if possible.
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May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I hope you pick it back up.
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was so cute! i love your style of writing...it has a nice flow to it. update asap
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June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I really like this so far! It's quite descriptive, especially about his condition. The repetitiveness just shows how serious his condition is, and makes me feel as if I understand how it feels as well (usually, redundance becomes annoying. You do it in a way that works!)
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May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, this is the first Hayate/Saku I've ever read. And I LOVE IT! I got a feeling that this fic is going to end very bad! But not all stories has to have a happy ending, neh? So I hope you update soon, 'cause its been a while since you've updated... And I know I'm not the only one waiting for more. So please hurry and update! ^____^ oh, please send me and email when you've updated, alry?! Sayonara
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooh good chapter as always. Just a little confused with whats going on with the Sand and Leafs. No worries, I'm sure I'll catch on later.
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't often go off and read M/F stories but the pairing intrigued me and I'm pleased to say the story plot and writing was excellent. I enjoyed this and look forward to more.
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
again a great chapter! I really lik ehow you let things evolve slowly for them! I also liked the scene in which the use the katana! that was so cute!
please update soon!
please update soon!
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, AFF.net ate my comment! T_T
Anyway,
I love the story! You need to write more.
I was actually suprised you hadn't hooked Neji and Tenten up, since most post time-jump fics I've read do that.
But Neji's natural idiocy when it comes to women is refreshing and very cute! :D
You need to write more! T_T
Anyway,
I love the story! You need to write more.
I was actually suprised you hadn't hooked Neji and Tenten up, since most post time-jump fics I've read do that.
But Neji's natural idiocy when it comes to women is refreshing and very cute! :D
You need to write more! T_T
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ack! Why haven't I reviewed this already?!
Feel free to hit me now. T_T
I LOVE this story, I especially always love how you characterize Genma and Hayate. <3
They're just too perfect! I was actually suprised Neji and Tenten haven't hooked up though, in most post-time jump fics, people have them as a couple, but Neji's obvious idiocy is refreshing and really cute. ^^
Write more! :B
Feel free to hit me now. T_T
I LOVE this story, I especially always love how you characterize Genma and Hayate. <3
They're just too perfect! I was actually suprised Neji and Tenten haven't hooked up though, in most post-time jump fics, people have them as a couple, but Neji's obvious idiocy is refreshing and really cute. ^^
Write more! :B