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for Mochi #9

by forgetmenow

person Anon
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
da asco odio el yaoi y aunque sea naruko sigue dando asco
person Bekah
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I agree, you should do another chapter with Kakashi and Sakura. Then tell us how it all wraps up! ^^. This was great, and the love scene though slightly disturbing was really good. I'll be looking out for another chapter, so don't leave me hanging!
person anime_girl_13
schedule June 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! That was awesome!!! Please please please do another chapter with Sakura and Kakashi!!! I'm dying to see how the love potion would affect THOSE two!!!
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'd love it if you continued this fic... it's pretty well-written, and the plot is hilarious.
person Naomi
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That girl I tell you was amazing, especially the 2 cond chapie!
I think You're such a good author,

Hey, just a little tip....hehehehehe why not make naruto get pregnant, and stay as a girl for ever?

Well is jsut an idea, but it probablly sucks...your stories rock and I don't want to kill it.

But why don't try e-mail me?

I love e-mail, and I love to have friend!
person great
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
do a next chapter ^_^ Kakashi and Sakura, woo hoo and you write so well it would be a great chapter.
person Nasis
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good! I can't wait for more.
person kiotana
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*song and dance* that was cute and smexy!*winx*
person Hikata
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O Wow. Smexy! I loved it. Please keep writing and update soon!
person Leech
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mm .. the story was funny, I have to admit. Spelling was fine besides few smaller mistakes such as "Shizune" instead of "Shizuna" in the first part. The first part of the story had a better ring to it than the other. The pairing is just so ... weird. So, I can't really say anything about the actual lemon scene 'cause I skipped it. The other parts were good for a laugh or two though.