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for Mochi #9

by forgetmenow

person Elk
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this fic is execellent! I can't wait to see how this fic will turn out in the end, I applaud you! *applauses* I LOVE the plot, and you've done really good in the lemon. Please email me once you've updated, I will definitely review once the next chapter comes up. Heh heh, can't wait to see once Sakura sees Kakashi and falls for him...Very good! ^^ Love the chapter and continue on writing, it's really one of a kind!

-Elk
person luthorlover
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh...I really like! I love SasuNaru -SO MUCH- and I really like the way you're handling it! I especially liked that Sasuke said that he loved Naruto by name. Very sweet. I like the idea of a little unexpected KakaSaku as well....

xoxo,
Monica ^__^
person Marik_Lover
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it you have to do chapter three please.
person mE
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Definitely "Good enough for another chapter"!! That was so sweet! I love you NaruTO! I can't wait to get more. I loved all of it.
person XHidaka
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Definitely good enough for another chapter! Seems incomplete, what happens with Sakura? I'm a huge Narusasu fan, and I'd like to see what you do with them ^_^
person Lanier
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was an awesome fic. I loved it. Although at the end I thought that kakashi and Sakura were gonna walk in on them. Then I also thought that maybe sakura and kakashi were going to have a similar encounter after she ate the sweet. Great work.
person blueinferno
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg you HAVE to do a sequel! Sakura/Kakashi what happened after she ate the wagashi...please please please?? take it as a request/challenge w/e just PLEASE do it!! *begs* i might even do a fic for u! any character..though, know this, i have never done yaoi before but i would like to try lol