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for Hinata's forever love!

by Mattleigh

person rpimp
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this a cool story
person Drum13ga
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great job, but you do need to fix the formatting just a little
person fanfic_lover
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good work but can you make longer chapters?
person Daratrazanoff
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story, keep writing.
person Pedromac
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was good but it was too short. If you could try to make chapters a little longer it would be better. And please dont try to neglect storys like some people do. Ther are stories that have people asking since 2004 and still they wont get anything.
person Josh
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope to see an update I like how everything is going on. But How come she went with Kiba and not with Naruto... Did Naruto try to go out with someone if so who and Keep up the writing
person jMarlow
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story keep it up
person Daniel Lawson
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting.... but that chapter was so short
person Chibi Harmonica Chan
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon!
person Mitzi
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good job!