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for Demon Soul, Chicken Soup

by Maldoror

schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your Lee/Gaara stories. You're one of the very few authors that can write this pairing and keep Gaara in character. I especially like the sense of humor, or whatever it's called, that Gaara has in them. Of course my head kinda hurts just trying to think how Lee would talk ^^ I hope you write more, and if not, I'll just keep reading these over and over again!
person Hestia
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Humor, deep knowledge of Naruto, fighting, romance--this one's great. I particularly love the bit about using the soup for interrogation/torture!
person Ox King
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved reading your oneshot. I do think Gaara and Lee are the perfect couple. Thank you for writting this.
person Wicked Bitch of the West
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gosh, dammit.....this was freaking good. I give you my props on the characterization, pretty good storyline, awesome writing of it and I slap you on the back for the interesting pairing. Write more bitch, write more. Hook me up with more fics like this and I'll swarm to read more. :) Just good shit, dude, keep it up. ^_^
person DirtyD
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww the fluff, I can see why you sort of set them the in an alternative universe, I didn't know Gaara could be sarcastic! Lee arguing with a gourd, that would be something to see. Your portrayal of Lee is very uplifting, he still is the crazy Gai-sick speech making idgit but he does have brains floating inside of his head and he is a very sweet innocent character. A genuine good guy, (I love Lee.) Now that I'm sort of on track I liked the sroty and Lee's interaction with Shukaku was amusing, he really memorized all Gai-sensei's speeches? That's something! Well I enjoyed the ficcy and even with Naruto you take intresting pairings instead of common ones, I love it.
person Berylia
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Lee makes such a wonderful nurse! I love Gai's recipes, it's just so him.
I also love the: let's get a dictionnary and then I can beat you with it.
person RadicalArcher
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This was funny, sweet, and gave me the chills, all at the same time.

I can't pick a fave quote. There are so many things, but I think the "I hope you visit me in jail" part with Lee was great. The part where Lee goes into Gaara's mind to confront his husband's demon (literal demon!) was creepy, but really good.

Rock on! (pun intended!)

~RA
"If I can't dance, it's not my revolution!" - Emma Goldman
person Alisha
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:)
Yay!
XD
Ooo another fine work, it goes well with the other oneshot...tis really cute!
I really like the plot, very epic inside Gaara's disturbed lil head ^^ :P
I liked Gaara's recovery and the destruction of all noise (excluding Lee....it must be love! XD). I especally loved when the great old geezer lied to Gaara then told Lee that he truely was gonna lose it...I laughed sooo hard..hehe silly old man.
This story was quite spectacular.
Until the next fiction!
~alisha
person Mehla Seraphim
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome lol.

"When I get better," Gaara mumbled, "I am going to need a dictionary."

"Wh-what?" Lee croaked, now completely confused.

"I'll use it to look up the word that exactly describes how stupid that was of you to do that." Gaara's eyes slid shut. "And then I'll hit you with the dictionary."

I love that. And the fact that he destroyed a doorknob from so far away lol. I feel like doin that when I'm sick too lol.
person eyes0nme19
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very cute fic...