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for Illegitimate

by Nushi

person Breek
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Even untimely updates work *smiles* this looks good. any ideas yet?
person Rashaka
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting.
person LadyLefaye
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You did an awesome job building up the tension here. I also like that Sakura is slightly manipulative rather than being oh-so-pure. Can't wait to see what comes next!
person Meg
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is quite impressive! I love the idea of this one. I really hope you decide to continue with it. It's a wonderfully refreshing twist and I'll wait with baited breath for another part.

Meg
person Mandelina
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story. The pacing was excellent, and your writing has a pleasant tone. It has a "storytelling" quality to it. I can *definately* see this story going places.... preferably dirty places, hehe. I would love to see you continue it!
person krickets
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhh thats to bad! this story actually has alot of potential over some of the others i have read and i mean that
well i hope to see more stuff from you eventually and ill be looking
person blueinferno
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like it, maybe you could do like one more chappie and she went to him, they have it and its all dandy lol
person anon
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story...very interesting.