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MWAHAHHAa let sasuke's evil plans commence!!!! lets hope there is some smut in between the plot ^__^ Please continue!!! cliffhangers are bad for the heart! GOod job!

*snickers* Poor Naru-chan. How's Sasuke gonna make him have a baby without the sexy-no-jitsu?

That was a good start. I'd definitely like to read more of what happens.

OMG! OMG! THIS IS SOOO SWEET!!! I LIKE THIS SASUKE ^_^ [lightning just hit my house from all the evil yaoiness..O.0]..can't wait for the next chappie-ja!

cool i wanna know HOW the hell sasuke gonna make naru-CHAN have his babies~ science can't prove that, maybe u can?
and ANBU is not only for Jounin as Chuunin can become an ANBU too(Itachi prove that)...ANBU is an abbriviation of "ANsatsu senjutsu tokushu BUtai" or Assassination Tactics Special Forces is sort of like hunter-nin... wait ...hunter-nin IS ANBU....but not all ANBU is hunter-nin ok..i'm making u totally confuse here X3 haha and yes! u must continue your story~

This a nice start. The flow of the story is a little too fast though, making it hard to follow. Sometimes I couldn't figure out who was speaking. Also, other stories I've read write "shin obi" as one word "shinobi." Of course, I'm certainly not fluid in Japanese, so the way you spell it could be correct, but I kept pausing over that word every time I came across it, interrupting myself. I would suggest maybe making it one word....just since most readers are used to it being written that way. I don't know, it could just be me.
Other than that, this story has great potential. Spelling and grammar are top notch. I can't wait for more character interaction. Hope you update soon. ^_^

hmmmm... well update soon..............................................
it's funny
i reaally love sasuke and naruto
wow that's new gaara and lee well its ok for me i love it..........

Mmmmm...more yummy SasuNaru. ^ ^ Just update coz I'm interested to know more.

I just love, loove your story. It's just great that you've gone all the way with the yaoiness, and turned all the guys gay! Now they'll all have to use Sasuke's jutsu, or the will be no kiddies in Konoha.. Thanks for a very original and funny and good and intriguing and.. well you get the picture. Thanks for the story, keep up the good work!

ABF#$(gr9zserhO)%W$%YQ(GER%(Q!! That was amazing. This has to be one of the best 'sasuke-ganks-naruto-with-the-intention-of-reviving-his-clan-while-awhole-bunch-of-other-people-get-hooked-up-in-the-process.-Watch-the-fangirls-scream-YAY' fics I've ever seen....and really, there's quite a few of them. Fantastic characterization and descriptive elaborations. I can't wait to see where this goes.....

I beseech you to update, I'm giddy with joy,
~Nacht