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for White Pureness

by UchihaYumi

person meh
schedule October 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
...I actually laughed out loud, such a tease.

But I think Hanabi is a little OoC - these actions are more befitting of Hinata.
It sure is hard to imagine her saying "please" when she has to just move.
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Shame that you ended this here. I would have liked to have seen how this ended. Why did he stop? It's such a cliff-hanger, like there should be more there. If not him, than who!!! Lol. Seriously, it would be cool to see this story continue on. I hope you decide to write more on it.
person blueinferno
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...really kool, i liked it. seeping emotions lol...i hope there are going to be more chapters. Maybe when their older and Hanabi see's Itachi again...maybe on a mission of a sort lol