rate_review Reviews

Your story was lots of fun to read.

cdk

omigod, this was the most awesome fanfic I have read in such a long time! You are awesome and most deserving of chocolate! I laughed, quite a bit, especially at the whole thing with Kakashi and Gai....because it's just funny. You're a very good writer, and I liked the plot. I also enjoyed the naughtiness...heehee ^_^

You Rock!

*blinks* *speechlessness*

IT was just.....wow

I've been reading this for about 5 days, that's dogding through my own updates and some other issues. But those five days were the best. There were moments when i became terribly confused, but other than that...i believed I have laughed my ass off most of the way through this.

You're a really really good writer (that's hard for me to find anymore), I'm gonna be sad though. I finished this, so now I have no more excuses when I ignore what my roommate is yelling at me for.

Pity. I loved making him wait to use the computer. He always got so fusturated and ended up going to the library. (not that he dosen't deserve it).

The part with the scrolls was kinda odd. But when the identitiy of those scrolls were revealed, I almost fell out of my chair laughing. It would seem like Naruto and them would do something like that.

Once again great job!

-Rubie

Awsome fic! I just discovered it last night and I couldn't stop reading it untill I'd finished it. One of the best Iruka/Kakashi I've ever read! Thanks! And the twist at the end between the teachers and former students was priceless, a perfect ending!

I was referred to this story by a link in a thread on well-written lemons. I'm really, terribly glad I found it. It's a wonderful, well-written, well-plotted, well-characterized, LONG, and nummy sort of story. You did a fantastic job writing everyone, and that includes Gai, who is... an adventure to write. You showed Iruka's strength and balanced out Kakashi's skill with his inexperience. You made this delayed ninja-coming-of-age (sexual maturity, anyhow) not only plausible, but really enjoyable to read.

A great story. Thank you so much for sharing!

i come back from a nice holiday, with no inernet (it is sooo bittersweet this part)
and i come back to....
one of the greatest fanfictions EVER WRITTEN.
and im not kidding.
you are such a talented writer and you have a beautiful mind with fantastic ideas and a great sense of humour.
thank you for this, it has made my month.
i weep, on my knees in humble worship of your venerated fiction and self.... you are friggin amazing!!!!
luv
T

Hahahahaha! Amazing ending! I honestly suspected Gai... no one's that obliviously genkai. This was a FANTASTICALLY written story! The Team 7 3-some twist at the end was great! Is there any hope of you doing a kind of prequel to show us how that one happened? Did Iruka/Kakashi inadvertantly have a hand in it or something? I'd LOVE to read something about that. Either way, your writing style is glorious! Thanks SO MUCH for posting!

I just finished reading your story! What a great ending. I was laughing my ass off!!! I thought that your lemon was fantastic. It was great! I really enjoyed reading your story, and I hope that you write more in the future! And I hope you did well in your finals! OChem was hard, but I just finished PChem. If you have that to look forward to, I am sorry! But anyways, thanks for writing such a wonderful story that made my day many times!

nYAaa it ended TT_TT loveeeeeeeeeeee th'e end XD hope to read more of yer fics XD

it ended!

it ended?!

IT ENDED?!

*explodes*

nooo!!!! i hate whenever this happens!!! this is one of the most real life fanfics I've ever read! depsite the whole ninja thing but the scenarios are very much real life.......


*cries a flood*