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hooo~ great fighting scene! i love ya' fic XD sooo goooooooooooooooood

hahahahahahahahahahahahaha
*falls off chair....*
hahahahahaha
whoot
*wipes tear from eye*
he he ... he...he
pfft
hahahahahahahahahahahahaha

I liked the shock chapter. I agree gai's face ain't much but his energy and body could make up for it. So it's nice that iruka can get where kakashi is coming from...funny that they both reacted the same way to their attraction (horrified). Ok you have said something will be done soon, I assume they will not just jump into bed so i wonder what those two will do to releave some tension. Have i mentioned i love this story? if not, I love this story and look forward to another update!:)

Hah! Finally! Kakashi and Iruka have gotten the main parts done with. I just enjoy how they some how keep eachother from sleeping! :P

Heh, Walk a mile in another mans sandals.
Those poor Ninja.
But you're right, in his own way Gai IS attractive.
I Can't wait to see how you're gonna end this.
=^_^=

Oi, Little Shadow... Getting better and better. I love fight scenes too. I took 11 years of jujitsu and I loved every minute of it. I really ought to go back, but you know how life goes. With a kid, I just don't have the time. And for what it's worth, I love Gai. He's so disgustingly optimistic and sweet while being able to be lethal at the same time. A very sexy combination, you know, if you can ignore the fact that he looks like a nerd. *laugh* Waiting for the next update!

wow you are really neat i love the way you write the intensity while keeping the reality in a firm grasp it's great i have seen few fanfics as good as this one and will be very sad to part from in it but all good things must come to an end ( crosses finger) please not this one it's too good

Okay, so I've waited (procrastinated) long enough, and now I'm finally reviewing ^_^ First off, I love your characterization! And the chronic masturbation chapter--PRICELESS! There is so much about this fic that I love! And kudos to you for keeping things realistic, not just making them jump straight into bed. I do have a small point to make about oneshots though. Very few people write them like this, but I think two people (ie: Iruka and Kakashi) could plausibly jump straight to sex, so long as love isn't a factor. Casual sex, anonymous sex, fuckbuddies, etc. You know, that kind of thing... It's just that a lot of fanfic writers assume that there has to be love for there to be sex, so they end up writing crappy oneshots where Soandso realizes he/she loves Whatshizface and they confess their mutual undying devotion and jump in the sack for mind-blowing first-time sex that miraculously doesn't hurt, and goes on for hours (yeah right... pfft..) So in short, I completely agree with you, but I do enjoy realistically written oneshots (however rare they may be). Keep up the good work, and here, take my cranberry sauce... I never liked the stuff much anyways, lol...

Awww!
That was so adorable!
I can't wait to see what they do next.
=^_^=

Yes demonstrate! Please demonstrate! :P Another awesome chapter. I really like how their relationship is developing. And it really is entertaining to see a sexually frustrated Iruka. :P