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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh heh, I love the fact that they were both looking for each other. I have so done that before. I am glad they are finally having their talk. I just hope that Iruka can hold it together long enough to get some talking done. Great chapter. I cant wait for the next and I will be really sad when this story ends.
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm....cranberry sauce. Sorry, you can't have mine, but I'll still give you a cookie.
Anyway, another great chapter...glad things are finally coming to a head...hehe...ummm...yeah
Sorry, I can't say more, but I've been working too long and I'm about to zonk out. Keep up the good work!
Ja!
Anyway, another great chapter...glad things are finally coming to a head...hehe...ummm...yeah
Sorry, I can't say more, but I've been working too long and I'm about to zonk out. Keep up the good work!
Ja!
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a truly awesome chapter. Wow, so much chemistry between them. What an awesome step for them both to have taken. And although I can understand how Iruka could not have betrayed Kakashis trust by pouncing on him, that must have been an emormous show of will power to leave. Cant wait for the next chapter and yes it is a great ride you are taking us on.
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this was such a cliffy! How could you leave us like this! :(
ack I can't wait to read the next chapter! Bring it on! ^^
ack I can't wait to read the next chapter! Bring it on! ^^
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story! I just sat down and read all 20 chapters straight. Fantastic story! The tension is killing me! It will be so worth it when they finally get together! You write extremely well, and I think one of my favorite things about it is the humor that you put in. Clever, not always obvious and in your face, but truely funny. Great, GREAT story, and I can't wait for your next update!
Chem chick
Chem chick
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WooT it about time XD i thought i was going to suffer a nosebleed when iruka said that. keep up the awesome work
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yea... just finished chapter 8, and well, as a guy i can say that your 'ahem' description of puberty is quite accurate, however, even the 'late bloomers' would... (for a lack of a better word) suffer more, than usual, but you are not nessesarly confused, more like intrigued by what you find out. And a text book is never more of a friend than then.
but any who, it's a great story so far.
je ne
kit master
but any who, it's a great story so far.
je ne
kit master
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
looking forward to your next update i have become addicted to this story
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bwa-HA! Death by nosebleed. hmmm.
Heh, sounds interesting!
And a very happy belated thanksgiving to you!
=^_^=
Heh, sounds interesting!
And a very happy belated thanksgiving to you!
=^_^=
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is blissful to read you know?
i normally dont like fictions longer than 5 chapters but your writing style is si alluring thati have to keep reading.
yes , i do worship you me deary.
i normally dont like fictions longer than 5 chapters but your writing style is si alluring thati have to keep reading.
yes , i do worship you me deary.