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for I Don't Think You Understand

by WaterShadow

person Komikitty
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor, poor Iruka.
And Poor Kakashi to.
I hope he's not going to be feeling to guilty about that.
You're still doing a great job!
=^_^=
person Gingitsune
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Although I do love easy PWP fics, there are times when I want an epic that demonstrates the hardships, exploration, fun that comes with a developing relationship. I love this story truly. Happy Thanksgiving!
person Heather
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! I've not had the chance to read on this story until today, and man...you've certainly been busy posting those chapters! Geez...I've got a lot more to cover.

But anyways, I just thought I'd let you know I was cracking up so bad while reading chapter three. I am glad that Kakashi got his ass whooped. I don't really know why I get some kind of sick pleasure out of that (who know?), but it's still interesting to see someone of Anbu level have to resort to a kick to the groin to stop Iruka's attacks. Ha...too funny. I do wish the fight would have been written in more detail. But since I've only read three chapters, I don't have much to go on. And the part where Kakashi was freaking out over his dry mouth...priceless. For someone so intelligent in everything OTHER than basic human relations, it was a real trip to see him be so clueless. Hopefull, Iruka will be able to help him out on that part (heh, heh, heh).

Well, I guess I'll get back to reading! Great job!
person A-Person
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'll give you cocoa or anyother dirnk you'd like.
The reason you rstory stands above the reast is that it's so...real life. This and the Kakashi Mission have been my favorite Naruto stories by far. ^_~*
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, Thank you! Some real hormone driven honesty. And I have a great deal of appreciation for any story that includes a cat description.
I agree with your opinion of love at first sight of body parts. It isn't life, and I like life.
A toast for Realism. Cheers. Good job, and I'll keep following.
person Lanier
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree with you whole heartedly on your ideas about lead up to romance. You are doing an awesome job and I love the excitement I get when I open your newest chapter and find out what those two are tackling currently. I loved this chapter especially .. havent we all been in that position asking an innocent question only to realize later why we got the reaction we did. I cant wait to see what is gonna come next. Much cookies to you..hopefully brain food.
person ZeldaFitz
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating so quickly, and on Thanksgiving at that! This is the first story I check every night; I'm hopelessly addicted. Another wonderful chapter. Kakashi really put his foot in his mouth this time, but haven't we all? How funny. I really enjoy seeing this side of our usually "god-like" Kakashi. And poor Iruka. How do you go about answering questions like that? Sending you Tums to go with all the cookies. :)
person Haze
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squeeeeeee* I love this story so much. It is written so well. I love the plot and the way that it is unfolding. It is really really really good. What a wonderful way to spend Thanksgiving!! Reading an amazingly awesome story about Kaka x Iru. I can't wait to read the next part of it! It's so interesting.
person Houseki
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah gomen bout the late review but i've been hella busy this last week but i finally got the latest chaps in and so here's the review ^__^

hmm what should i say? well...as always, the story is flowing brilliantly and it's so entertaining to read about kakashi's "firsts" on everything with Iruka...dood I was CRACKING up with the iru/kak/gai dream *smirks* toooo funny! oh and i totally enjoyed the naruto/sask tid bit you had kakashi imagining ^__~ good times! lol

anyways..keep up the good work, as always..and until the next chap hopefully :p

~Houseki
person Dragon
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You want more cookies, you got more cookies, if it'll help with such timely updates all the time. My mom just made some anyway... *cackles madly as she makes off with homemade cookies to give to a certain online fanfiction writer she doesn't even know, yet loves oh so much*