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It's alright, take your time.
That last chapter was enough to keep me snickering for at least a week!
=^_^=

Don't worrie. I belive you'll do fine, and if not than I'm sure the next chapter will be worth the wait. ;)

After following this story for the last few chapters, I got a late start, sorry. I find myself drawn to the character's steady growth. If it went faster the whole issue of believability would be lost. I do have a slight problem with Iruka's patience, like you said he has the patience of a saint. I seem to recall that there is no such thing in life. He does show significance stress over the mild jealousy he's feeling and a little irritation about the mask, but not wanting to rush and not needing to rush are different issues. I am not saying change him, I still enjoy the way it's going but i would like to hear him a little more sexually incoherent as he supposedly has done this before. He would be the one having truly erotic dreams that Kakashi would never understand no matter what books he's read. But, that is my opinion and leave it at that.
I look forward to where you take this. Continue with the hard work and I send you Rice Krispie treats shaped like bunnies. I don't know why.

Yes I dont think I would have been as in control to the same conversation as Iruka was. What a difficult prospect to have to be teaching someone you care about. It brings up such awkward moments. Cant wait for the next chapter.

I'll give you a cookie, or two, or three. Chocolate chip? Oatmeal raisin? Peanut Butter? They're yours! Just as long as you keep updating.
Iruka is such a cool guy; being patient with Kakashi even when he admits he's been "looking around" and at GAI! Urgh.....gotta say, that's a little disturbing.
I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work! ^_^

I don't think I have smiled so much that my cheeks hurt after reading your story. I just love the interation between Kakashi and Iruka. Iruka has the patience of a saint. Where on Earth do you get your ideas for this? Anyhoo, I love your story and look forward to the next chapter.

Joy for you! *provides mountains of cookies to fuel fast typing fingers* You always prove to astound! The Gai-twist is lovely, seriously, but it lead me to wonder if Kakashi will try to talk to Gai later... Hmn... And about those scrolls? I don't think it's Naruto that's sending them. Nah, I'm leaning more towards Sasuke> *nods*

PS -- I still love you. ;)

Hehe I will have mental trauma too if my significance other looks at Gai in a sexual manner too *shudders* Hehe love your chapters as usual. I think that curry is a great dish too!! *grins* So the sex talk? I would love to see how Iruka is going to handle that! *grins*

Hah! Signed in again! Well, sweetheart, you caught my heart with this chapter again. I love the patience you've provided Iruka with. I think there's a reason he became a sensei and as a result, he has certain attributes that make him perfect for the inexperienced Kakashi. No stories for you this time, love, but don't worry. I'll have more to say soon enough!

Snoochieboochies!

*faints*...gai....
yes.
the filler chapter was brilliant, utterly preposterously brilliant and yes...nauseating. but not iruka so its ok.
you're a legend again.