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for I Don't Think You Understand

by WaterShadow

person A-Person
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For a guy who reads porn, Kakashi really seemes to be new to this stuff. Oh, is that Iruka getting feisty? ^_~*
person Komikitty
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uwahhhh!
I was laughing so hard at the shower scene I nearly choked!
Please keep this up!
My KakaIru addiction thanks you.
=^_^=
person Elecia Pena
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hee! Hee! Hee! This story just gets more delicious with every chapter! It's interesting to see Kakashi rediscovering his Icha Icha series. Yeah, I agree that it's good for him to realize that sex isn't just about penetration. I can't wait to see if he brings this new curiosity to Iruka's attention. While I'm sure Iruka won't have any complaints about getting more physical, going from kissing to giving head is a major step. Like to see how they handle that. Also, yeah I just realized that Kakashi's sexual blooming has just been aimed in Iruka's direction. It'd be interesting to see how Kakashi would deal with feeling attracted (physically at least ) to people other than Iruka, not to mention how said boyfriend would react as well. Jealousy, anyone? Hate to think that Iruka might have competition. Actually, I've been wondering how Kakashi would react to seeing someone else flirt with Iruka. I can't imagine he's felt jealous before, unless it was about someone being a stronger or more skilled ninja than him. Ah well, staying tuned for the next installment!
person BrucesGirl
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, first of all, I'm gonna tell you something about kissing. I'm married and have a son. To be honest, some of the fire went out of our marriage, and we got really irritable with each other, and the sex wasn't helping anything. So one day, he comes home, tells me he's tired of being bored, and just grabs me and kisses me. I'm telling you right now that his kiss is nothing like I've ever experienced from anyone. It's soft, sweeping, and yet, when he's passionate (or horny) he puts just enough pressure into it that I'm reduced into a female puddle of goo.

There is also something to be said about the familiarity of a kiss. My husband was gone for an extended period of time, and while he was gone, I dreamed of the way he tasted, smelled, and the way he touched me. No one ever touched me like he does. I crave it when he's gone. The warm scent of him mixed with cigarette smoke, colonge, and Dr. Pepper just has a way of turning me on so bad. The familiarity of the way his hair slips through my fingers when I run then through it is something that I also crave when he's gone.

The point of this? You can have a heart wrenching, arousing thought without EVER thinking about the actual act of sex, and I think your innocence and lack of experience in sex has made it possible for some people to reevaluate what they consider to be erotic. I think you are doing a fantastic job with this story, and I do hope that you keep it up! This is my screenname on this site, so if you ever wanna read a story and drop me a line, I'll be right here. :)

Be well.
person Saske\'s Iris
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, letting Kakashi stew with his thoughts has very interesting results. iruka is going to have alot of blushing to do when kakashi catches up to him next (dreamy grin). Though would it hurt iruka's feelings or make him jealous to know kakashi is attracted to another I wonder?... i don't think i like the idea of iruka or kakashi for that matter getting hurt...but I know i will enjoy the next chapter so i look forward to tomorrows update!!!!!!:) oh and when will that damn mask be coming off?!?!?! I am with Iruka on this give me a face to go with those lips...!;)
person snow887
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woot, keep the updates coming....and also kakashi *runs away laughing like an idiot*
person Elecia Pena
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don't feel bad about the update. I had problems just navigating the site, so I think it was having a fit or something. You more than made up for it though! I love the idea of Kakashi exploring the wide world of kissing! It's also good to know that even though Iruka is more experienced than Kakashi, he's being just as affected! It's like he's learning how to kiss all over again! It makes him more human rather than him having a 'been there, done that' attitude. Nice twist with the scrolls! I've got a guess as to who their sender really his, can't wait to see if I'm right! I'll greatly regret when this fic is over *sob*, and I'll be hoping pleadingly that you'll start another Kakashi/Iruka fic soon after!
person YerFan
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
each chapt. is better XD i absolutely love the way you write this is now oficially my fav. fic XD
person snow887
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was so cute ^__^ i'm glad iruka showed kakashi that french kissing isn't gross,*gives iruka a high five*
person Houseki
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah dood I was so bummed last nite when I saw no up'd...I had one of the worst days ever, and was lookin forward to a lil idtyu, but I did notice aff was havin some difficulties throughout the day. But at least the chap is up today! And what a chap inne! I totally love how into it Iruka is now..very into it *smirks* oooh and who is the mystery scroll sender?? I think I have an idea *chuckles*

Ah the inevitable french kiss...yeah in ways it is kind of gross--especially if the one your kissin is a smoker and what not...but if you can find the one person who matches you, fits your lust, love, and eroticness, a kiss can be orgasmic. I've had only two perfect kisses. Sweet tasting, soft when need be, hard when wanted, not overly wet, just the perfect amount of saliva mixing to highten the taste buds..the numbing, buzzing feeling of your blood rushing from the excitement can make you dizzy. ahhh to find another perfect match! lol

ook i'm done talkin about kissin...makes me want to go kiss someone lol annnnnyways...love it!

Nic