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Woo Hoo, Awesome chapter... Hmm poor Iruka letting himself get caught up in his thoughts. And I loved the creativity of the kiss at the end. Great work, cant wait for the next chapter.

Ha, very nice! ^_~*
Hah, I like how Iruka was trying to stop his lust at the end. XD
Ahhhh! Gai in pink!

the first time i ever french-kissed someone, i ended up with their gum in my mouth (gross!!!)

great chapter again. i really like the pacing of this story.

ps: WHO is sending those scrolls?! (isitnaruto?)

the scrolls don't stop...well that is good cuz they are helping iruka out and kakashi doesn't know anything so they lead him in directions to explore..which is good and the lip nibble was way hot so i applaud the writer!!!!!!!!that was an immensely satisfing chapter wonder if it is naruto writing those..he is taking a very keen interest in the two and plays pranks so u know he is clever or is it a party as of yet unmentioned ...give us a hint has the scroll writer been active in the story thus far? I AM SO GLAD you update regularly i...just...HUGS...thank you!!

chuckling ..just had to go back and re read the chapter on advice bwahaha that is still too funny!!

You know this is definetly becoming one of my favorites, and I'm seriously enjoying your after-chapter remarks, very funny. Also, I laughted my butt off when Kakashi went to talk to Tsunade about his problem, that was perfect! I can't wait to read more!

Lucky you. I have only once experienced a kiss that sends tingles down my toes. Never experienced it again as the whole thing was a setup by a vicious girl wanting to get blackmail material. Anyway, when you said that Kakashi would bring the matter to Iruka, I thought that you meant that he is going to show Iruka the scrolls. Oh well. Is it Naruto?? *grins* So Kakashi is a genious at kissing and Iruka is getting sexually frustrated. Heheh I am so totally enjoying this situation. More??

OMG that was an unbelievable hot chapter. *fans self* I too could not get onto AFF.net. I was greatly annoyed by that fact and yes you were right about the fact that when I did manage to get on it was slower than a camel with two broken legs.. mine loaded about as slow as a dried up snail. Anyway enough of my rambling on. I love the way that this story is evolving and I am very intrigued by the continuation of the scrolls. I just hope that we dont end up with an all out battle over the affection of Kakashi.. Hee hee.

Good stuff. The kiss scene was hot, hot, hot! I'd rate it as hot as some lemons I've read. Now, one must wonder who is sending Kakashi the scrolls. I can't wait to find out, and I'm sure it will be a shocker. Or at least, I'm hoping it will be since twists make a story so much better. 'Underneath the underneath' and all.

well guess what.....
i still loooove you!!!!
hooray for good fanfiction!!
my lava scorched and bloody knees feel happy at having been noticed.
i am squee-ing in happiness. (you can tell i dont get much attention hahaha)
once again, a fantastic piece of written literature and reat story.
In fact... the story's gradual advancement is perfection. Ths coming from one of the most impatient people on the planet.
lots of crawling through razor blades and broken glass to worship your feet...again.