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for I Don't Think You Understand

by WaterShadow

person Dragon
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If it means war, shouldn't there be a sequel? ;D
person Gingitsune
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't want this story to end!! *wails* where am I going to get my KakaIru fix now??? Love your development of this story. It was funny, sweet and oh so enjoyable to read. Thanks for sharing and I hope that I'll be able to read more of your works. Good luck on your exams!
person Whispers in the Wind
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Cheers* You've done well with this story. I tip my hat to you *tips pointy hat* A very, well done (sweetlylemon) story ^_^ Love the ending, "This means war." Does that mean "sequel"?

*bows* *leaves offering of Jolt cola and chocolate*

You deserve them. Cheers.
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww... My sweetie!! This was such a wonderful story, and I'll be looking for you to start new ones. Add me to your email list or something and let me know how everything goes.

I'm so excited. :)

Kisses and hugs.

Katie
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The standing ovation begins now *---* And continues until you decide to start another wonderful fiction.
Bravo, kudos and fabulous work. I am so impressed I feel like deleting my work and starting all over.
Thanks, for this wonderful story, and I hope to see more from you as your schedule allows.
person Houseki
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah I can't believe IDTYU is done! *cries!!* it just seems like last month you started posting it...oh wait, that WAS last month..and here you are 35 chapters later!! You are an amazing writer and this story was so fun to read, and quite different, surprising, and everything else that it was..mainly, it was a wonderful read, and i hope you continue writing and posting on aff so we can endulge in your work! Perhaps you might take interest to my new challenge...bet you'd kick some serious ass on that one ^__~ Anyways, you're great, keep it up, and until next time!

Mata!

Houseki
person Saske's Iris
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOO it can't be over i enjoyed it sooo much and it was soo well written and it is the only thing keeping me awake at 3 this morn between anthropology and biology. GODs above kakashi and iruka are so cute together i just don't know what to do with myself! Wow loved the shout out too (blush) your story is worth every praise I gave and more! never bored when reading your work (how can i with all the hilarity that is iruka down to his sneaky smile) (oh oh and the lovable kakashi...the icha icha book was such a nice touch too...3bcom1 still chuckling).
person yurathewicked
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the ending was just too perfect- great job! as always, narusasusaku is much appreciated and i really like how you introduced their relationship in the second to last chapter. you write very well :)

i guess i want to just say thank you. you wrote an entertaining story for us, taking time out of almost every day to add a chapter. life is hectic enough without doing something like this~ so thanks. i hope to see more stories from you in the future.

-yura
person silverblade shi-fox
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
first of all, i have to say that this fic had me checking aff every day (sometimes twice a day...just in case) religiously! whee! it was my current fave pairing and it was written well with a premise that made -sense- AND iruka got to be occasionally evil. *nodnod* so while i'm sad it's over, i enjoyed the ride. i liked the characterisation a LOT and the bits with gai were hysterical. i also empathised with the whole "sudden discovery" bit since i, myself, went through that sometime earlier than my firends and had to deal with it on my own... *rueful grin* so i enjoyed the reality of that. and poor iruka's frustration...yeah. i've been there too. very well done. and the lemon was very hot. i enjoyed the play of impressions rather than a detailed technical scene, because it seemed more (i keep using this word) realistic.
secondly, i have to share the fact that i was listening to the the operation 2 soundtrack cd from "gundam wing" as i was reading the last few chapters and just about died laughing when i go to the the scroll from naruto, sasuke and sakura in chapter 34. at that exact moment, the track that started playing was "a new hope" - which is a sort of "the hero enters the stage" dramatic instrumental and it just suited so well i couldn't help giggling.
thank you for a wonderful fic, hope all your exams and such go well!
person Lanier
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOO HOO! That was the perfect ending to a perfect story. I am so overwhelmed I don't know what to say. I feel all their happiness and I love the ending of the scroll. I can really see them doing something like that too. I sincerely hope you do write another story and I will try to keep my eyes out for one. I only have one tiny typo question for you. The word special at the end of the Icha Icha Paradise title is spelled odd, was that a typo? Sorry just had to bring it up. Anyway, I am so thrilled with the ending of this wonderful story but so sorry to see it end. This has been the first thing I do when I crawl out of bed for the last month or so. Now I will have to find something else to get me up. *sigh* You know if you get inspired.. you could expand upon your Sasuke/Sakura/Naruto threesome and the impending war.....heh heh heh Just something to think about. Til next time.