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for I Don't Think You Understand

by WaterShadow

person Luna
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, really good story so far, and I never really like reading yaoi! I love how it builds up like this. I hate it when the main characters fuck in, like, the second chapter, this way it's more fun to look forward to. I also like the different take on Kakashi's sexuality and whatnot - although I wouldn't think he's really like that - I'd imagine him being quite experienced in bed (hehe, especially in my fantasies *blush*)
But yeah, can't wait till next chapter!! Keep em coming! (no pun intended...durr)
person Saske\'s Iris is bored in texas except when readin this story
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lookie lookie I am reviewing,(check one), the latest chapter was good i totally forgot that Kakashi wouldn't know about all the little games we play and you did a great job not making that conversation too akward, i LOVE this story (make the author blush check two), ya gotta update don't leave me hanging here with kakashi still fully masked (beg for updates check three). I wonder how that first date will go...sigh poor ikura is gonna be infor a ride wonder if kakashi will pounce on him or just keep control...wonder if tsunade will take bets...wait this is neither here not there. Can't wait for an update!!!!!!!!
person saske agian
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I second everything Manda-kun said never read a story with this plot before it is just facinating and there is nothing worse then waiting so long for an update that the story looses its flavor. that is not the case here you keep us mercifully sane with updates. In a way this story gets to me because it makes me think oh i forgot about that step huh, like fresh eyes on an old saying it suddenly is more potent (if that makes since) everyone knows what a kiss is but remembering your fisrt is always fun and kakashi is getting lots of firsts here (hehe).
person Lanier
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was another great chapter. I love the childlike innocence he had when he was asking Iruka about how two men go about sex. It was that perfect bluntness that children have when they cant understand why their question startles adults. I cant wait to see what comes next.
person Houseki
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! A great way to end the night by seeing an up'd for idtyu!! woot! hehe yes you so do rock and this story rocks and i want you to do one of me, write like 4 fics at once so everyone can enjoy your stories more!! hehe *cough* yes, i do have 4 stories, 3 published and one i just started to work on *damn multitasker!!*

I think he’s had me since the first death-threat. Total chuckleness right there dood. I was like 'hell nah, for real?' wow, sounded a bit like nelly when i wrote that *cough* Represent! muwahaha! yeah i'm an stl girl but ok sooooo gettin off track lmao plus i'm sure you could tell i'm more of a rock chick with my 'rock on's 'you rock' 'rock rock yeah rock' -ness *cough* off track again..gotta stop leavin ya reviews right before i zonk out!

i'm sooooooooooooooooo happy you're takin things slow with the guys..makes it more realistic, well my reality at least! ppl should not jump in bed the second they know they find themselves attracted to one another...come on! i must've lived back in the old days when there was a thing called 'courtship' *smirks* ahh welllll you're doin it so i'm glad ^__^

Keep it up hun! You rock!

Houseki
person snow887
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you are GOD!! i love this fic so much. reading your fic makes me smile and grin in a lecherous manner *shifty eyes*
i love your iruka and kakashi. i can completely agree with you on how kakashi would act in a relationship and also iruka's way ^__^
this fic is the only thing thats making me get up early in the morning and staying up late to see if it updated yet.
i shall wait for your next update XD
person Lanier
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was awesome. Poor Tsunade-Sama... she managed to keep her cool very well. And poor Kakashi being forced to trap his hands rather than give in. HEE HEE, cant wait to see how Iruka handles this storm coming towards him.
person Green Rose
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor, Poor Kakashi... And poor, poor Tsunade-sama who has to deal with it..
Nice and funny chapter... had me almost spitting out my coffee!!
person Houseki
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
TA! Every night this week I have been looking forward to your next chapter! And you have yet to fail in up'ding! Go you! hehe Anyways, this is such an outstanding piece of work. I am not one for the Kak/Iru coupling, but I guess this is turning out a bit Iru/Kak, nya? hehe WHICH btw, it should be ^__~ I've been drawn to a lot of diff pairings as of late, and right now, this is one of my favs, thanks to you!

Your writing style is perfect. No need to pull any of my hair out for once! hehe nanchatte!! Like fyredevyl said, no spelling or grammar errors to be found...and if there were, tch, who cares lol the story itself and the way you express it is quite entertaining and in some cases diff from the norm. Explaining your thoughts on the matters of the story is nice..I always like to read some of the a/n's and learn a bit more of the psyche of the fic-ka.

Anywho, the progress of the story is great...tonites chap had me rollin!! The CASTS!!! ahh too great! i love an innocent Kakashi..it's too fun! i just can't wait until you get the two together and have Iruka "teach" Kakashi about the birds and the bees? *cocks eyebrow and laughs malicously* Too fun!

Keep up the good work! And I'll be seeing ya tomorrow nite, nya? ^__~ HOI!

Mata!

Houseki
person Dragon
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love you. Honest to god, without a shadow of a doubt, undeniably LOVE you! I swear, every little bloody thing you write... ^-^ I just love you.